|Reviews for Lives of the Ancient Etruscans|
| Jochern chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
This is a pretty great and interesting story. Very interesting. But I do think you should divide it into a few smaller chapters. It is a tad too long but otherwise it's very well done.
| Hoplite39 chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
The story looks interesting, but the chapter is too long at over 20k. I would suggest that you split it out into several smaller chapters. That we people can read a few chapters each day if they like it.