|Reviews for Cupid's Arrow|
| Really chapter 27 . 9/4/2020
I loved this with a passion. Except for Oliver's indiscretions. I really wish he hadn't slept with Felicity then went on to sleep with other women while Felicity was pregnant. Yeah sure he didnt know. But she did. And I dont care that he did it to keep her safe or whatever. It was shitty and instead of her being so damn understanding, she should've run for the hills. Or told him no when he deigned to sleep with her again while trying again with Laurel. Sometimes the angst in stories is for a reason but not here. Oliver's getting his cake and eating it too while Felicity is picking up his scraps (cause you know he REALLY loves her) and working her self to the bone for the Hood. Fatal flaw that ruined this story.
But i still stuck it out and started to enjoy again. Felicity protected her baby thru going in the casino, being alone thru the undertaking, finally getting her happy story...and her baby gets stolen! Thats not good writing, its manipulative writing. Why? Why put that in and never resolve it? Yes i glanced over the depressing sequel & saw it wasnt ever solved. I feel cheated out of the story this couldve act like they are writing for themselves and yes it is free to readers. But if it was for yourselves youd never download to a public site and have reviews.
| Guest chapter 27 . 7/12/2018
Oh damn. Fuck me sideways with a metal spork that was dramatic and I love the angst
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/12/2018
I love the hood double talk! Thank you for writing and sharing with us
| Thea1013 chapter 27 . 6/24/2018
I just happened on this story and hope that you will revisit it for an ending.
| nikikins chapter 15 . 5/24/2018
Oh yes screwing other women to keep the one you love safe, oh so NOBLE of you. Makes a girl feel special esp when she has a front row seat to your sexcapades. But wait you still loved crazy Helena when she came back didn't you think that? Oh yeah and you still loved Laurel too you thought. I really wished Felicity hadn't let him come back in her window after all that and had sex with him. He hadn't stopped what ever the hell that was he was doing with Laurel. I don't think Felicity even realized that was going on yet. And she just sleeps with him, so happy (?!) Oliver was seeing other women, sleeping with other women, and being mean and cold to her cause that meant he really loved Felicity. He was only doing all that to keep her safe after all ...even though he kept telling himself he had string feelings for all 3 of his girlfriends McKenna, Helena and Laurel. I mean who wouldnt feel special with that kind of treatment! U use to love this so much but 3 years went by and I read the crazy sequel I missed first. (Wow that was not for me). Then reread this and realized this was totally dysfunctional relationship ship and kinda made Felicity look pathetic.
| Words Unleashed chapter 27 . 1/27/2018
Ok I adored all of this apart from the last few chapters but that's only coz they have had their baby taken. I have laughed out loud during so much of this and want to thank you for writing and sharing this story, I rocked and you are amazing :D
| Guest chapter 11 . 12/13/2017
This is the most fucked up Arrow fanfic that I have ever read. I actually hate Oliver in this one.
| bonetrek chapter 27 . 9/15/2017
| Guest chapter 27 . 4/9/2016
This was great! I loved the songs paired with each chapter.
| An admirer chapter 5 . 1/31/2016
Is she pregnant? :)
| XxStein99 chapter 27 . 12/15/2015
Omg great story! Defiantly going to read the sequel now
| alphawolf7258 chapter 18 . 9/18/2015
Love the Story
| Guest chapter 27 . 8/28/2015
Wow. what a story - amazing
| india-guest chapter 27 . 8/8/2015
| dreamingofolicitrealized chapter 6 . 7/31/2015
Really? He loved Felicity, but he still loved Helena too?