|Reviews for KISS|
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/8
"Poor bastard." Oh my god... I am freaking dying right now xD
| fantsyfreak chapter 1 . 2/15
Oh lordy that ending! It made me laugh so much!
| Kawaiibentou chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
Poor Soul, he never accounted for having good old Mr. Murphy (Murphy's Law) being the unwanted third wheel. Love the ending
| bloodthirsty4u chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
Sooooo, I may freaking love this to pieces.
| M.A chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
| SilverRowan4 chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Oh. My. God. Wow. Just, wow. Let me start by saying I think you are an extremely gifted and talented writer. I've read all of your stories, and they are just great. The storyline flows well, you don't leave anything unresolved, and you are flippin HILARIOUS. I love the way all of the characters are portrayed. Especially Black*Star. Everything is just so well written. I've been on this site for while, and I've read a lot of stories, but yours are some of the best I've had the pleasure to read.
And now that I've buttered you up...
PLEASE WRITE A NALU! They are one of my favorite ships ever, and I'm really excited to see how you would write a story for them!
Please keep writing. I look forward to reading more stories from you. :)
| bblackbbutler chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
| Thunderbreeze chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
HA! That was awesome, especially the part with Spirit at the end! Poor Soul, he couldn't get anything to go right... and Maka's day sucked too. This was creative, and very funny! Great job, this is going in my favorites :D
You made a Harry Potter reference! I love you!
Thanks for writing this! Thunder
| s0ulmatch3r chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
XDXDXD OMFG U HAVE NO IDEA HOW MANY TIMES I DIED WHILE READING THIS I WAS LAUGHING SO HARD I HAD A FIFTEEN MINUTE COUGHING ATTACK!
Like, really, I'm a laughing zombie right now. LAWL
| ILoveSxS chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
poor poor soul
| Shadow Cat From Hell chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
He glared at her with affronted dignity, flushing as he recalled their first time awkwardness. "That wasn't my fault! It kept moving!"
"It did not!"
"Soul, I do not have a-a traveling vagina!"
"It. Moved. End of story."
Omg, I love this so.
BumblingSoul is freakin adorable 3
| chelsea-chee chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
This was a very cute one-shot. And I feel so bad for Soul! However, his admiration just made me love him even more. .
Thanxs! :) :p ;)
| sasuhina gal chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
this was too funny, great job
| Zi-Dawg chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
Can I just say ilu *_* Bitsy...if there was any way to describe just how much of a cockblock Soul is to himself...I would use that word...but for now I'll just use
hahahahahahahahahahah oh the poor sap XD Oh Bitsy I'm glad I waited to read this. BECAUSE BITSY'S FICS ARE AWESOME! Can't wait for the next thing ya write ;)
| Edge of My Life chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
LOL! I definitely loved this way too much :D