|Reviews for Germany's Tears|
| pietromaximoff chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
Holy Roman Empire, the feels in this... It is so sad! I love your writing but this made me cry, AGAIN! Poor Prussia, you must regain your awesomeness!
| Din Venn chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
Good. It seems that you know the basics - how to write properly (you have no problem with punctuation, ortography etc.), so you're only job now is to find your own writing style.
Generally, I don't like Italy, but I really appreciate your Feliciano. I like his bond with Germany. You described their friendship well.
"Bruder has given up, but I will not." - I think foreign-language words should be written in italics, but it's only a suggestion.
And I noticed one mistake: "Why wont the tears stop falling?" - not "wont" - won't.
Sorry for my English if it's bad.