Reviews for The Second Chance
wookie9001 chapter 22 . 2/12
holy cra... wow, just... wow.
I didn't see that coming! awesome twist!
wookie9001 chapter 20 . 2/12
/agree w A/N
Molly really SHOULD have picked up on it...

im really enjoying your storytelling, you're awesome, keep it up!
wookie9001 chapter 21 . 2/12
epic dad fail... lol.

i think this is already a huge improvement over this scene in the anime, it really needed this extra amount of detail to it.
wookie9001 chapter 19 . 2/12
wow, not really big on all the mushy stuff myself, but it was well written at least, lol.

Great character development!
wookie9001 chapter 18 . 2/12
i like Serena and Sammy's relationship in your story, it has a much better feel to it than in the anime.
wookie9001 chapter 17 . 2/12
i think that your characters get better with each chapter, they seem to be growing with the story.

i like how closely you follow the anime, but also make it your own at the same time. great work!
wookie9001 chapter 16 . 2/12
your story sucks me in! i can't not read it!
wookie9001 chapter 15 . 2/12
i loved the opening to this chapter.
The fact that in the anime, nobody in all of tokyo seemed bothered by this mass invitation really struck me as bizarre at best.

your characters are very real and, well, human! great work. keep it up
wookie9001 chapter 14 . 2/12
YESS! no more "corny speeches"! hahaha

Seriously, great concept! I really am shocked that more fanfics do NOT feature this behavioral change.
wookie9001 chapter 13 . 2/11
iiiiiiiiinteresting!

finally we're getting back to nephlite! can't wait to see how you spin this!
NeoPrincessRini chapter 25 . 2/11
Only one more chapter?! What?! theres so much to cover! So much that has to happen! Ahh! I cant wait! :)
wookie9001 chapter 12 . 2/11
oh the feels! aaand wakagi! cool minor character to use here.

i like the subtle changes and twists you're adding to the story everywhere.
wookie9001 chapter 11 . 2/11
wow so Darien DID have something to hide about what happened to her. I don't understand why Serena thought Luna was a narcissist right off the bat, but oh well.

Good chapter, i really like the depth these characters have.
bluebutterfly2006 chapter 25 . 2/11
:-)
wookie9001 chapter 10 . 2/11
I kept waiting for Darien to be all like "Can i say something crazy?" xD

but seriously, awesome action scene! very nice twist at the end.
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