Reviews for Merging Worlds |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue it soon |
![]() ![]() damnit. why you don't finish the story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Story seems interesting plus I love it so keep it up! |
![]() ![]() update please |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome! please update quickly! |
![]() ![]() ![]() huh, so Nel is Plateado's child, and Pesche and Dondochakka are her friends. so, who are the other two women in Minato's 3 girl harem going to be? i would have thought sara would be one, but i doubt it since she's already had Arturo's children. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kushina tells Yoruichi that she and Minato are expecting their first child and they want her to be the child's godmother They met once. "She's like the sister I never had," Yoruichi says, "our personality are almost exactly the same." They met ONCE. With the previous encounter with their visitor from Tetsu no Kuni still fresh in their minds ONCE. Almost a year before. When they see dozens maybe hundreds of people a day. "You are practically my sister by now," ONC- Oh, sod it. You're clearly writing just to shoehorn this specific character into the plot, realistic portrayal be damned. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not even finished reading this chapter. This needs to be said. You are writing in English. So WRITE IN ENGLISH. At the very least, add translations whenever you use the Japanese terms. I'm here to read a story, not find out what snippets of Japanese you've learned by watching anime. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was quite a bit of setup. Though it's appreciated since it clearly outlines where and how the two stories merge. Means there's no need to spend pages and pages of characters giving bacstory and exposition. I'll keep reading and see where this goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You've got my attention. More Please :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() well there you are, have alreasy wondered when you will update your storys and what did I see...another story with 3prologe chapter's. LOL. A good story till far, can't wait what you planned next. thought who will be in narutos harem this time? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I find this story rather interesting and unique...Please update soon... Lol...Obito got his ass Handed by both Minato and Yoruichi..Oops those who have not read manga forget that...;P SO Minato is going to get harem of three womans...Kushina is one...I make a Quess and Say that last Two are Yoruichi and Sara-Hime...So Minato did not tell Kushina that He Met Naruto in ROuran mission..:XD She will kick his ass later for that! XD SO far So Good...Keep upd your good work and Now this is getting interesting... |
![]() ![]() ![]() so kushina is an arrancar now. though all things considered, it was the only course of action to save her, and she did conquer her inner hollow (well, resolved her issues) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz)(can you Plz add Hinata, Sakura, Ino, Anko, Tayuya, Tenten and Temari to Naruto's Harem)(PLZ?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() An impressive chapter again, though it does feel a bit rushed in places and there are a few errors here and there but overall very nice. |