|Reviews for Loving Hope!|
| killyourself chapter 3 . 1/29
Where to start?
Your version of Petey is quite possibly the most emasculated version I have ever read. He gets hit in the nose with a newspaper...really? He reads like he has a vagina, like he is perpetually on his period. He's moody, whiny, boring and a crybaby. Which I suppose makes him perfect for your OC who is as bland as a box of frosted wheats...without the frosting. She also reminds me a lot of cherrybomb's character Aiden. I'm not sure if that's on purpose or if you're that infatuated with her character. Or you're unoriginal...whatever. I'm glad you haven't used her in your story, I'm sure you would tragically misuse her as you have Petey...AND Alex. One thing you have gotten right is Ajay. Mary Sue, I mean Ajay, is just as annoying in your story as she is in KFND's. Center of attention for no reason. Its been done, that horse has been beaten to death about her and Bobby, move on! What is her/your fascination with rape and anal? Geez if you're going that route, at least write it well. Its so uncomfortable reading it your way. All of your stories are trainwrecks. Puhlease invest in a beta...maybe that will help. Sorry for being a little harsh, I mean it constructively though :) have a good day!
| EmbraceLove chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
:( Poor Petey. I can't believe anyone would ever be mean to him. It's like beating up a puppy. It's just...come on, it's PETEY! Like how could anyone not like him? His ex-wife is a bitch and someone needs to kick her ass hard.
This is so sad! I hope you continue soon.