|Reviews for Double, Trouble|
| Mantlady chapter 2 . 3/8/2013
Story line still good. Punctuation and spelling still (gentle, now) not so good. The twins, unfortunately, might be real, which is scary;)
| Mantlady chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
Cute premise. Your is not you're, the contraction for you are, and old farts like me find that quite annoying. Suggest you fix your grammar ( get it? ). You also need help with punctuation. That aside, good start.
| jmts2012 chapter 2 . 3/4/2013
Sweet and funny chapter.
Dreams are so all over there but the image of Tank and Ranger as black Easter bunnies lol priceless. Loved how Joe fell asleep and her method of waking him up.
| mel7190 chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Gotta love dealing with kids! Cute story. Hope you continue!
| jmts2012 chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
Love how easily Joe knew what to say and do. Rings true of someone who comes from big family too.
Steph not being able to tell them apart was funny too!