|Reviews for Mustang meets Dog|
| SnowKi chapter 18 . 1/7
more pleaz 3
| Lady Dragon010 chapter 18 . 8/13/2008
How is Ryoga related to Kouga? Please continu.(Aqua Girl)
| Gohan Zero chapter 18 . 2/4/2007
Hope to see an update soon.
| None Subcriber chapter 5 . 6/6/2006
I will start this review by saying the premise of your story is good. What throws me off balance, however, is your characterization. You are really showing inexperience by changing the characters to fit a mold decided by your like or dislike. It's distracting.
For example, Ukyo and Shampoo in your story are instantly transfored into these caring girls, while the character of Akane is babyish and stupid. You're highlighting their growth, while turning the chracter of Akane Tendo into the joke of the group. Another clear example of this is in scene where Akane discovers who P-can is.
It's inconstant...I believe you should either have them all act in their humorous role as is canon for "Ranma 1/2" or balance your characterization.
| Paper Fans chapter 8 . 1/4/2006
Ahh! I cant read this anymore! Please take this as "a well rounded critique" and not a flame. But I, in my own opinion, dont like this chapter at all. I hate Mary-Sues with a deadly passion, and Meinu is definately a Mary-Sue. Why does Sesshomaru talk about fifteen words to her, and then decides to take her as a wife? Thats REALLY OOC. But other than that, this fic was pretty good, up until I got up into the seventh chapter. Well, I hope you arent offended, and if you are, I am sincerely sorry.
| The Sleeping Creature chapter 18 . 4/9/2005
| ladyofthedragons1 chapter 18 . 10/25/2004
uhoh not good no kidnapping the daughter that's never good... update soon great story
| dream weaver chapter 18 . 8/25/2004
I only started reading this recently, and I must say, I love it so far. the only thing I didn't like was the fight scene with sesshoumaru and inu-yasha. there is noway that he should have gone down that easily. the tokijin can strike from a distance with that yellow energy that surrounds it and fluffy has always been faster than his brother. that being said, I was wondering if you have abandoned this. it has been over a year since the last update.
| Eleature chapter 18 . 8/25/2004
Wow! Great story. It's the best Ranma/Inuyasha crossover I've ever read. Keep up the good work.
| gossa chapter 18 . 6/7/2004
Very good fic! :D
I like it a lot
| Lord Aries Greymon chapter 18 . 6/2/2004
Simply freaking brilliant story.
I do believe it is, unique yes. However I recently read another Inuyasha Ranma crossover.
Only Ranma and Akane could use the well in it.
I like how thou have dealt with the romance aspect of this tale, although thou have failed utterly with the Nekoken. I like some of the hilarious shit Ranma pulls whilst under it's influence.
I do believe that you have more than succesfully conveyed Sesshoumaru's "Rightious Fury" at Jaken's betrayal.
Thou are in my eyes, a full Liege, Kiyomisa.
Lord Aries Greymon
| Kari-Ryu no hime chapter 18 . 4/11/2004
Ok u should write more. it's been a few months since i checked on u last. it's a really good story, though.
| Internal Bleeding chapter 18 . 4/8/2004
*Gasp!* how could you! u must update! please? -_- never mind i'm being stupid -_- but please can u update? -
| dragongame chapter 18 . 2/11/2004
| Meriadoc chapter 5 . 1/29/2004
Cool cool. Please continue. it rocks and thsat's saying a lot.