Reviews for Swooped by the Cloud |
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![]() ![]() Thats smooth of hibari. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh.. wow... THAT IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL GIFT A GIRL COULD HAVE ON VALENTINE'S DAY! Hibari really knows how to woo someone! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my I love what hibari did it was funny oh my |
![]() ![]() ![]() GIVE. ME. MOARRR. |
![]() ![]() Aww, this story was really cute! How Hibari swooned Chrome, I suddenly had the song "Smooth Criminal" pop in my head. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kyahahahaha Oh God this is hilarious. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! kkkkkkkkkkk' xD Hibari is amazing, but I can't imagine this scene (alright, I'm jealous of Chrome, but with this who would'nt?) You have a great fanfic ;] |
![]() ![]() Can you update Our Baby Moments.! Oh and nice story |
![]() ![]() Awsoooooooome! Write more! This was funny. I like how they tried to show off eachother to chrome |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the ending it's so Hibari-ish |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was... AWESOME! I simply loved it! When the Hibird's came i almost thought that when u said swooped u meant it literally... In one word... awesome. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() X( uggghhh as much as i love 1896 i still want to see more fighting over chrome! ah! i turning sadistic! lol what if takashi came along too? since its one of the top pairings? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah poor Byaku-chan and Muku-chan. XD Hmm... this kinda inspired me into writing another 10096 fic... :) Well, but I'll wish that maybe you can continued this story, like how each of them nearly get a chance but in the end, Hibari still won (Lol, it's the first time I decided to let HIbari had Chrome all the way *smirk* Sorry, Muku-chan XD) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOMENESS!** But you should give the other two chances! If possible! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hibari wins! :D |