Reviews for The Tender Trap
betwixtful chapter 12 . 9/9/2014
i forgot about the elite ninja again. why did he have to see that! i actually kept thinking leonardo's brothers were going to walk in on them. but this is worse! and i was so happy when she called him her boyfriend.
betwixtful chapter 11 . 9/9/2014
it was great to see the brothers reactions to leonardo and splinter's fight, and what leonardo has confessed. i liked that despite that karai may act unempathetic and may do bad things just for the pleasure of it she still corrects herself because she cares about how leonardo feels. donatello's take on leonardo and karai together was so great. that ending, i really liked reading his feelings how cassie and april being together.
betwixtful chapter 10 . 9/9/2014
it's nice to see them in a place that isn't the sewers or rooftops, or that abandoned church. i'm apprehensive of that foot elite watching her. but i had only just remember she was being watched with everything happening in the story. i hope things work out for them. i hope leonardo protects her from the shredder.
betwixtful chapter 9 . 9/9/2014
yes i think this chapter did come out as you hoped. it was poignant, and what karai feels while comforting leonardo i though was quite meaningful. rather well-written! i'm excited to read the rest, and that i'm only a little less than halfway through.
betwixtful chapter 8 . 9/9/2014
i'm so afraid for karai. i feel like it's only inevitable she gets caught. hopefully she suspects something. it's nice that despite everything raphael had to go through he still covered for leonardo.
betwixtful chapter 7 . 9/9/2014
that makes sense people would avoid her considering who her father is. i never thought of that possibility. again i like how the thought of leoanardo comforts her. she's had such a hard life.
betwixtful chapter 6 . 9/8/2014
ohmygod. i know this sounds bad but i'm glad that elite foot ninja died. i didn't want her to be caught by shredder. and it makes it interesting that raphael now knows about leonardo and karai.
betwixtful chapter 5 . 9/8/2014
when reading that scene with karai and leonardo on the rooftop i had to keep pausing both from the romance of that scene, and also because they were being watching! like when karai mentions raphael to make leonardo jealous.. and raph is there listening! i want these two to be happy together.
betwixtful chapter 4 . 9/8/2014
why is karai so scared of going back to boarding school? did something awful happen to her there. leonardo's punishment was felt visceral to me, and karai's was cruel. i liked the part where she thought of leonardo to comfort her. that was nice to read.
betwixtful chapter 3 . 9/8/2014
i didn't expect karai to get so angry, but the reasons why made sense. and i like how angry karai can get leoanardo.
betwixtful chapter 2 . 9/8/2014
good fight scenes. i liked the part where leonardo got distracted by karai's perfume. how he reacts to his attraction to her both here and in the show is cute. haha. i'm grateful i found this story completed.
betwixtful chapter 1 . 9/8/2014
i already like it. though i'm apprehensiveness of the tragic aspect of the story. i don't like romance that's too effusive, but i want the characters i like to make it to the end alive and for the most part okay. i'm glad i found this story.
onepiecelawfan chapter 22 . 8/30/2014
raises hand
it would be interesting of karai was pregnant and the child looked human
Taylor chapter 22 . 8/14/2014
This has been really intriguing...Can't wait to start reading part Two! Excellent Writing!
LoveLeonardo538 chapter 22 . 8/6/2014
Wow, such a deep story. Great Job. 5 stars. The ending really leaves someone with a broken heart for their complicated romance.
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