Reviews for The Tender Trap
betwixtful chapter 20 . 9/9/2014
how in the world is this going to end. is this going to end with the couple never getting back together. i suppose i wouldn't mind that much, considering i thought perhaps one of them would die.
betwixtful chapter 19 . 9/9/2014
i'm glad leonardo made it out alive. liked the beginning with splinter and how he thought of april coming into their lives and influencing all the turtles. i don't know how karai will convince leonardo she was telling the truth. but i want her to get as far away from the foot and from the shredder as she can. and it's very bittersweet that even though leonardo thought karai was lying to him he still loved her.
betwixtful chapter 18 . 9/9/2014
donatello's feelings for april are so sweet. i can't read this story fast enough. i hope this is the end of leonardo's torture. that his brothers will rescue him soon.
betwixtful chapter 17 . 9/9/2014
i was wondering if marcus brokker would return to the story. i certainly didn't expect it to be in that way. that was both unsettling and well thought out. i'm glad i found this story when it was completed, i don't think i could handle waiting for the next part.
betwixtful chapter 16 . 9/9/2014
the shredder isn't going to kill karai despite knowing about her and leonardo. okay, that realization is kind of a relief. i hope his brothers and splinter get there in time to help leonardo. them or karai. and your writing of the shredder is certainly complex enough. i liked the backstory you developed for him. and i suppose it makes it more interesting in a way how leonardo's father and karai's influence each of them and their actions.
betwixtful chapter 15 . 9/9/2014
i hope that leoanardo's brothers and splinter save him in time. and that he can save karai. this is what i've been apprehensive about this whole story. i hope karai and leonardo make it out of the shredder's lair and do so alright.
betwixtful chapter 14 . 9/9/2014
looking back on what i've read so far i like how developed all the characters perspectives are. despite splinter's anger, though it was understandable to an extent, i liked that he understood he made a mistake and sought to correct it. moreover i liked how all of the family's reactions stem mostly from them caring for leonardo and wanting him to be safe, and not their contempt and hatred for the foot.
betwixtful chapter 13 . 9/9/2014
i had a big exhale at the end of this chapter. i was afraid karai would be home when shredder had returned, knowing about her and leonardo. as malicious as that remark those foot soldiers and the receptionist intended, i'm glad they said it. evidently things won't get easier for them, but she has a better chance the farther away she is from the shredder.
betwixtful chapter 12 . 9/9/2014
i forgot about the elite ninja again. why did he have to see that! i actually kept thinking leonardo's brothers were going to walk in on them. but this is worse! and i was so happy when she called him her boyfriend.
betwixtful chapter 11 . 9/9/2014
it was great to see the brothers reactions to leonardo and splinter's fight, and what leonardo has confessed. i liked that despite that karai may act unempathetic and may do bad things just for the pleasure of it she still corrects herself because she cares about how leonardo feels. donatello's take on leonardo and karai together was so great. that ending, i really liked reading his feelings how cassie and april being together.
betwixtful chapter 10 . 9/9/2014
it's nice to see them in a place that isn't the sewers or rooftops, or that abandoned church. i'm apprehensive of that foot elite watching her. but i had only just remember she was being watched with everything happening in the story. i hope things work out for them. i hope leonardo protects her from the shredder.
betwixtful chapter 9 . 9/9/2014
yes i think this chapter did come out as you hoped. it was poignant, and what karai feels while comforting leonardo i though was quite meaningful. rather well-written! i'm excited to read the rest, and that i'm only a little less than halfway through.
betwixtful chapter 8 . 9/9/2014
i'm so afraid for karai. i feel like it's only inevitable she gets caught. hopefully she suspects something. it's nice that despite everything raphael had to go through he still covered for leonardo.
betwixtful chapter 7 . 9/9/2014
that makes sense people would avoid her considering who her father is. i never thought of that possibility. again i like how the thought of leoanardo comforts her. she's had such a hard life.
betwixtful chapter 6 . 9/8/2014
ohmygod. i know this sounds bad but i'm glad that elite foot ninja died. i didn't want her to be caught by shredder. and it makes it interesting that raphael now knows about leonardo and karai.
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