Reviews for Behind The Mask
jasperiscool chapter 6 . 12/9/2014
I love the ending. It's so sweet!
kkjones3 chapter 6 . 9/1/2014
Great story. Excellent ending!
alexiana75 chapter 6 . 8/14/2014
A short story, but sweet and warm
alexiana75 chapter 3 . 8/14/2014
well, it is very allright to accept criticism...The constructive type, of course! But I also write, for over 20 years now, and I do not have even a tiny thing to criticise (I hope I got the word correctly- english is not my native language).
Oh, yes, I found one: the chapters are a little too short!
alexiana75 chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
too bad, people did not write more reviews on this one. I'm glad I found it (is the second time I read it). You did a very good job, especially since writing in First person is not so easy
Guest chapter 6 . 4/13/2014
AWWWWWW
Linneagb chapter 6 . 1/14/2014
Awwwww, as I've said twice. You get everybody so in character and they are so cute. I just love the father/ daughter relationship Carlisle and Bella has. The ending lines were great
Linneagb chapter 5 . 1/14/2014
As I said before, you get everybody so incharacter. Awwwww
Linneagb chapter 4 . 1/14/2014
oooh poor get everyone so in character :)
Linneagb chapter 3 . 1/14/2014
Awwwwwww. Poor Bells, but Carlisle is so freaking cute
Linneagb chapter 2 . 1/14/2014
awwwwww 'nuff said
Linneagb chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
Awwww. I LOVE when Carlisle goes all daddy. This is so sweet
crotia chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
I think this is the fourth time I read this story and I still love it
jesse chapter 6 . 11/22/2013
how cute ! the fluff-wait it is fluff, right ? was IRRESISTIBLE
jesse chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
it was well done i love it keep on persevering
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