Reviews for Behind The Mask
Amu4ever chapter 5 . 1/9
Alice was right with her asesment :)
Amu4ever chapter 4 . 1/9
A human would have got a heart attack with such a reaction :D
Amu4ever chapter 3 . 1/9
Aww...Carlisle is cute :)

Fater - Daughter moments with those two are just awesome!
Amu4ever chapter 2 . 1/9
Huh...why can't he shield his thought? He had more than a century to practice...
Amu4ever chapter 1 . 1/9
Hmmm...she limbed wonder what she managed to do to her foot...
Guest chapter 6 . 12/14/2015
This was a really sweet and cute story️
Shadowhunterlover 00 chapter 6 . 7/27/2015
Awwwwwwwwwwww! I can't stop smiling!
jasperiscool chapter 6 . 12/9/2014
I love the ending. It's so sweet!
kkjones3 chapter 6 . 9/1/2014
Great story. Excellent ending!
alexiana75 chapter 6 . 8/14/2014
A short story, but sweet and warm
alexiana75 chapter 3 . 8/14/2014
well, it is very allright to accept criticism...The constructive type, of course! But I also write, for over 20 years now, and I do not have even a tiny thing to criticise (I hope I got the word correctly- english is not my native language).
Oh, yes, I found one: the chapters are a little too short!
alexiana75 chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
too bad, people did not write more reviews on this one. I'm glad I found it (is the second time I read it). You did a very good job, especially since writing in First person is not so easy
Guest chapter 6 . 4/13/2014
Linneagb chapter 6 . 1/14/2014
Awwwww, as I've said twice. You get everybody so in character and they are so cute. I just love the father/ daughter relationship Carlisle and Bella has. The ending lines were great
Linneagb chapter 5 . 1/14/2014
As I said before, you get everybody so incharacter. Awwwww
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