|Reviews for Naruto: Menma Chronicles|
| helkil chapter 7 . 4/22
I can read anymore seriously o my god I'll try later maybe but WTF is this shit I'm only reading this to see if he has the nine masked beasts there's vary little stories were naruto in canon gets menma's powers/abilities and also I'm a firm believer in if its not naruhina don't let the bitch get close to him and then u have the gall to fucking have tsunade in this shit WTF o and u give him sympathy to the fuck aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa like I said I'll try to read more plus all the fights I've read so far are nothing but jutsu the fuck is up with that? Sorry I'm not a good writer
| jbadillodavila chapter 1 . 4/1
Me gusta n.n jjg
| death 59 chapter 22 . 3/14
now this is a for writing it it is awesome
| NexusRider161 chapter 1 . 3/7
This is the first time I've ever seen Hiruzen get the Evil!Manipulative!Dumbledore treatment.
| NameEyezhack chapter 1 . 3/2
U still forgot his loved ones which were in Konoha!
| EternalKing chapter 22 . 3/1
Don't take it the wrong way but this story isn't very good. It has lots of action but that is it. There is no development in power or character for anyone at all and despite this being slightly unique it falls far short of what it could have been
| Elia950 chapter 22 . 2/24
Great Story! *_* i really enjoyed the twist from canon that this gave!
English is not my main language, so I cannot really comment on the grammar and the like. but i can say that the story was easily readeable, and it was smooth!
Sure, some things were not easily understood when they appeared, but everything got explained later!
| Guest chapter 22 . 2/13
A masterpiece, absolutely wonderful plot however character development was lacking
| Bloodmoon234 chapter 6 . 1/28
Chapter 6 is good but you forgot that one, strongest female character of kishi is Kaguya, mother of the Rikudo Sennin. The damn woman is practically a goddess in a real sense of the word not like Karin in this fic. Second, the Rikudo Sennin cannot absorb senjutsu mixed attacks therefore Karin is not suppose to absorb katsuyu's acid attack because all the jutsus of animal summons use senjutsu. This is the same weakness Naruto exploited in his fight against Nagato.
| Guest chapter 22 . 1/24
What happened to Hinata. I'm pretty sure you said you couldn't kill her off. So...where did the Hyuuga bitch go?
| The Kamereon chapter 22 . 1/16
I thot he was gona ressurect he uzumaki clan.
Shouldve have haku . hinata . karin . honoka all at once breaking the narutos moku bunshin hands. While he watch at a safe distance
| slythian chapter 22 . 1/7
| goddragonking chapter 5 . 12/10/2014
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more updates soon and Really awesome story, can't wait to read more:)
| marquis.shax chapter 18 . 11/20/2014
you screwed up your own story by saying that Madara survived and gained some of Hashiramas powers for himself when YOU said in the beginning that Hashirama took Madaras eyes and evolved them into the Rinnegan before giving them to Karin. When you write a story it would be good if you could at least remember what you wrote so you don't end up completely contradicting yourself and fucking up your own story lol. Also how is this even a "harem" story or even how is Karin a "love" interest of Naruto when there's been nothing between Naruto or any of the women in the story so far and all there is left is to pretty much finish the battles
| marquis.shax chapter 16 . 11/20/2014
I don't think he focuses on Sasgay so much due to his originally wanting him to be a woman. I think Kishi envisions himself as that little Uke and so he's trying to make him some kind of a dark hero