|Reviews for Kinda Outta Luck|
| Guest chapter 22 . 9/21/2013
Confusing and Weird story! Are you like the Bella you wrote? Cause she really is a flake! Hated the ending! She's still a fucked up confused person who didn't deserve Jake!
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/20/2013
I like the story but it seems sometimes you talk in riddles. A little hard to keep up with
| grace chapter 2 . 8/18/2013
good so far :)
| snow eopard chapter 22 . 7/23/2013
this is the best frigging story i have ever ever read at all1
i love ya! ; )
| TeamJakenTDL chapter 22 . 7/12/2013
wat an awsum ending
see ya 'round with new fics
wishin u the best of luck 4 future
see ya around
luv ya n ur wrk
| ilovfanfic chapter 22 . 7/3/2013
first time an author thanks me in an author note...sniff...i didn't even write so much becaus ei was sometimes too lazy but i never let a chapter pass without reading it!
I loved this story...still does...uou make my though month of the first half of year 2013 more lighter by being there!
Thanks for sharing your work, a pice of your soul...
and i hope to see you soon in an other story!
| PastOneonta chapter 22 . 6/30/2013
Really wonderful, this story grabbed me. They were neat and unique and they evolved and developed. You gave them a happy ending too, which I appreciate. Love the books and music and TV. So real. The families made it real, the jobs made it real. Just wonderful. Thanks for writing.
| PastOneonta chapter 21 . 6/30/2013
Poor Bella, she is really sad. How is Jake though? After he opened his heart to her can he be okay?
| PastOneonta chapter 20 . 6/30/2013
No, wait, what? She can't? I was sitting with this silly grin on my face because he was so sweet and perfect and a scavenger hunt with all these people/things from their life and she can't?
| PastOneonta chapter 19 . 6/30/2013
This hurt to see her struggle with the unexpected loss of Gran. I think Bella generally is struggling and I am worried. I think Jake knows about Quil and her. I will read on and find out!
| PastOneonta chapter 18 . 6/30/2013
I love it, "we both missed out on everything" says so much about who they are and now this journey. Nice she went back to Shady Pointe, kind of to say goodbye. And Jacob gets it, I wasn't sure he would but he needs the experience too.
| PastOneonta chapter 17 . 6/30/2013
They have to resolve this. Jake is not going to be happy in Everett much longer. She has to have confidence that they can move and stay together.
| PastOneonta chapter 16 . 6/30/2013
Fantastic. Your Bella and Jake are perfect, and their wait to be together felt right. What a great story you created.
| Crawling Back to You chapter 22 . 6/24/2013
I'm speechless right now. This story made my stomach hurt and made me feel like crying for the most part-but that isn't meant in a bad way at all. I am so bad with my words sometimes but this is one of the realest stories I may have ever read, and I really think you deserve praise for how well you write and how well you can sort of manipulate reader's emotions. You're a wonderful author.
Sorry if this review is weird hahaha but I really enjoyed this and will continue to enjoy your work.
Thank you xoxo
| YoungKittenWhitlock chapter 22 . 6/24/2013
You are a very gifted author! You had me on the edge of my seat throughout this whole story. I don't normally read Bella/Jacob or Bella/Edward fics, but you really kicked it up a notch or two. (Jacob is so incredibly sweet. And both Bella and Jake are beautifully broken) I loooved chapter 16. Jake and Bella's first time was a trip. I loved how nothing went right yet it was perfect for them. And the fist bump at the end. OMG. I laughed so hard. Chapter 20, Just, whoa. That was a really crazy proposal. It really pissed me off though that in the end, Jacob acted like it was his fault that Bella ran away. But that shows how great your writing is. I absolutely loved everything about this fic and I am for sure going to check out your other stuff. :D