Reviews for Kinda Outta Luck
Master Gaga chapter 16 . 5/12/2013
This chapter WAS dope.
It was magical, celestial, and any other adjetive you can find that describes this chapter was the glorious and epic thing it was. It was heartbreaking, romantic and funny and rolled into one-something many try to do but not many manage to pull off. I am glad to say you did. Pull it off, I mean.
The sex scene was...you headed into smut territory right there. You were graphic, but not overly graphic, and the humorous comments made by both Bells and Jake kept it from being too...pornographic?
To me, it was great. Yes, you're right-one of the best chapters in the story, and it IS a favorite of mine (it just became that). Fuck the people who think otherwise, ok?
And darling, drop me a line whenever. A la Ellie Goulding, you know I care.
withlovej chapter 16 . 5/12/2013
Oh, wow, honey. That was something. I wasn't quite sure what to reckon when Bella started crying. Then, Jacob and the condoms, the gas shop and the actually sex. I could stop laughing because the way they bickered as they were having sex was hilarious. I loved how awkward and quirky this chapter was, babe. Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Lady Blackwater chapter 15 . 5/7/2013
This story makes my boner buzz.
Lady Blackwater chapter 14 . 5/7/2013
"As I kissed him tenderly, he groaned. I would have done just about anything just to hear that little groan. In fact, no. I would have done just about anything for him. Feeling him next to me - the hardness of his muscles (amongst other hard things) to the beat of his heart to everything in between - never got old. It was exhilarating and relaxing at the same time.

Jacob started to tug my sweater at the shoulder, and he put his warm, soft lips right there, not moving anywhere else. Another thing I'd learned about him was that he was thorough, but he took his time. He liked to kiss me almost everywhere but the lips; he could really be a tease if he wanted to. He totally knew what he wanted."

THE BEGINNING OF A PERFECT LEMON DEE WHY
Master Gaga chapter 15 . 4/28/2013
This chapter was very, very lovely. It was so romantic and funny and full of depth and character growth that I found myself yearning to be in the story. I wanted to hug Bella. I wanted to congratulate her.
And Jacob. Jacob was simply the best. That nab...he has the purest, most honest heart in the entire universe, and you are faithful to it in such a way that I...I'm starstruck.
I specially loved that part about Bella's Gran. I didn't see it coming, but it was so great that it happened. Bella needed someone-besides Jacob, of course-to believe in her. I'm glad her Gran is that person. But I wonder...is her Gran is still alive?
withlovej chapter 15 . 4/28/2013
Love this chapter! Jacob and Bella were so adorable on the swigs together. I can imagine him throwing her over his shoulder and running away. So cute!
Master Gaga chapter 14 . 4/25/2013
This was just...so epic and sweet. It was like candy-incredibly delicious. I'm so in love with this story, Music. I'm truly in love with it. It's deep, it's romantic...it's got everything a story needs.
Sorry if this review isn't as long as my other ones-i'm just still rather dazzled. It was so heavenly. I'm going to talk to my friends about it. Over and over again, 'till they stop reading whatever it is they are reading and come right to you. I'm making it my mission.
Geneu chapter 14 . 4/25/2013
And why do I have a feeling that it wouldn't be alright...
And welcome back :)
withlovej chapter 14 . 4/25/2013
Hey love! This was updated! I'm so glad! And hope you had fun on your trip! But, glad this was updated! My life's been a mess and this made me smile. Despite being in pain, I enjoyed this a lot! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Master Gaga chapter 13 . 4/19/2013
YES! IT HAPPENED! Good God, it happened! I'm so glad it did. The whole story had been building up to this, and how it happened...it was so natural and organic that saying it felt like more than Fanfiction would be only but the truth.
You've just given me one more reason to continue reading this story and loving not only the lovely things you write, but you've also restored my faith in the pairing that is Jella. Does that make sense? Hmm. I hope it does.
Anyways, great chapter. Enjoy Cali.
withlovej chapter 13 . 4/18/2013
Great chapter, love. Glad you have me something to smile about. Lately, life's been pretty ugly for me. So, this made me smile. At least in their world—even if it's a fictional world—someone's happy.
Geneu chapter 13 . 4/18/2013
Before it was something like a still water. Smooth ride. Grey zone. And now Bella took a leap. Backwards. Who knows what's there? :)
Master Gaga chapter 12 . 4/15/2013
This chapter was delightful. Every single bit of it was epic and lovely, something only you've managed to achieve while writing Jella. I mean, yes, others have written tons of Jella stories-but none have been as good as this.
Anyways, back to the chapter :) I loved to see their relationship develop. However there was this undercurrent of horrific, impending doom approaching. What was that about? I'm quite worried for my Jella feels.
Keep writing! It's just epic.
Gillian Cooke chapter 12 . 4/14/2013
Excellent story. Keep updating!
SaphireJacksonBlackPotter chapter 12 . 4/14/2013
That was cheesy in a good way! I loooooovvvvveeed it! Thanks 4 writing!

I think they're falling in love!

Lol. Update!

Saphire x
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