This was so awesome to read and I thoroughly enjoyed every word! Everyone was so true to their characters!

That was a great fic. And one heckova twist at the end of the story. An interesting one. I enjoyed it.

imo hunters need a govermental oversight, im not gonna outline it just think of any supernatural show with an agency working from the shadows. the men of letters was a good start, but not enough, make that official with actual training for hunters? they should be far more efficient.

im suprised you didnt do this, as if the goverment would ever allow amateurs to take the law into their own hands, hell they'd even want to use magic as a weapon. ofc by not doing this you stuck nicely to canonand made this basically an two episode run of supernatural, had you created this official men of letters you had a perfect set up for a sequel. especially if this was just after they found the bunker, more canon to play with and all that.

gotta say im a bit dissapointed how it ended

wven if you pointed to the lingual differencenxi strad ot the societal its till funny

rofl you comparing spoiled amricans(first world countries) with the view of ppl who actually fight for their rights, in this case israelians

damnit i just cant help myself, i love your gibbs, he jokes he is serious he is funny he is gibbs! damn but the writers of ncis couldve learned a thing or two from you

im not quite done with it but i can guess where this is gojng and tbh? you should have made this after the found the bunker and then made a sequel for this. instead of the leviathans you couldve used the apocalypse as evidence.

deanna and samantha

this.., i never got why they didnt use demon trap carved bullets all the time. shoot them in the leg excorsice them and the host only has a leg wound.

fucking super natural, there is a reason i stopped watching it

i love love love what you did to gibbs, i really cant say this enough. this is whaf ncis shouldve done instead of making him a brooding asshole

oh it should be noted ive read or started to read and then dismissed between 10 and 20k stories, so me saying this is great when i fav a little over a hundred fics... and can only name two writer to equal your humor... you are a one procenter if not a 0.1 procenter.

yes im gonna look if you wrote anything else.
secretly hoping you wrote a super natural fic that took the 'bunker' and made it into an officiated agency. seriously that place was to under used

your sense of humor really is great, so many writers focus on drama, drama is easy, kill the loves ones and brood a lot, but humor? humor is tough yet it brightens the world.

thank you for writing this wonderful fic, there are... well tbh there is only one or two writiers i can think of that show this kind of humor

yeah you are going down the rabbit hole here.

first such an supet secret organisation only exists in comics. even if it does in real life, what kind of super spies develop a way to impersonate ppl and then expose themself by robbing banks... thats lex luther level of stupid and brilliance.

i could go on but simply put by now the evidence is more then enough to prove the supernatural, except for mcgee but he is a scientist who doesnt want to believe what he cant replicate

so an ncis investigation uncovers what the cia nsa etc did not notice despite being so damn obvious,

no one misses the apocalipse by lucifer

again trying to apply to much sober logic to supernatural is digging your own grave

remember what i said about digging your own grave? you've gone sciency on us and fucked yourself. lets put it like this, what we have our enemies have because its based on the same principles its just the execution is done differently.
what does this mean? any super spy stuff you find that can only be speculated upon theoretically and is in no way real unless you have an alien science repository allowing you to skip discovery and go straight to manufacory.

something unknown, unheard off, so ground breaking it would change the political landscape and power balance does not come out of the blue thus leaving only one explanation... its called oscams razor