|Reviews for If You Need Poetry|
| GobblewonkerJeb chapter 1 . 3/25
This is really good, and I can tell, cause I have a knack for poetry.
| Missy the Least chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
And when the muse hits, you just gotta let it out!
Vers Libre (free verse) is always a good starting point to at least get it down. But part of a poem's ultimate effectiveness is the form and structure chosen.
While you don't have to make every poem into 'Roses are Red; Violets are Blue', choosing the right form is as important as choosing the right word.
These words are crying out for a more structured format, and I would suggest going onto a place like poetry dot com and looking up the requirements for things like a sonnet (although a crusty fellow like Bones would most likely rather die by drowning in a vat of honey than write a sonnet to his love), and picking the form that leaps out at you with the words you've got.
With the right format, this drabble can really sing! (Heh, I knew being captain of the Western Mountains Poetry Team would come in handy sometimes!)