Reviews for Unexpected
cela chapter 9 . 9/17/2015
so glad to see the take charge major making an appearance! how in the hell did the Romanians know about bella and angela? they have a fortune cookie stronger than alice or peter?
Mr. and Ms. Cuddles chapter 4 . 8/26/2015
Why have you abandoned this interesting and unique story?
Crystal Dragon's blood chapter 21 . 9/4/2014
so much for a week long torture
Crystal Dragon's blood chapter 20 . 9/4/2014
i like how she thinks!
Crystal Dragon's blood chapter 19 . 9/4/2014
didn't he just want to see totur?
Crystal Dragon's blood chapter 17 . 9/4/2014
awwww
Crystal Dragon's blood chapter 16 . 9/4/2014
i am confused on who is in control... but ok
Crystal Dragon's blood chapter 15 . 9/4/2014
voices in her head... funny
Crystal Dragon's blood chapter 13 . 9/4/2014
hes got 3 personalities!?
Crystal Dragon's blood chapter 9 . 9/4/2014
oooo dont mess with the major
Crystal Dragon's blood chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
evil bitch...
KCBrett4ever chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
I don't like Alice acting this way. I might not like how Edward will act either. But good story.
kantorkan chapter 24 . 5/1/2014
Stupid little bitches should not have run off like little spoiled children.
kantorkan chapter 22 . 5/1/2014
What ever they do the Romanians won't like it i'm sure.
kantorkan chapter 21 . 5/1/2014
Don't want to get on Bella's bad .
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