|Reviews for ASCE|
| Anon chapter 1 . 11/22/2016
This is painful but beautiful. I love it.
| Everlight18 chapter 1 . 4/21/2016
This is really good. I got a little choked up with all the lines from his past, especially the ones from Sabo's letter. That whole backstory made me cry.
The last 4 lines are priceless. We don't really see it, but I think that Luffy never liked flames after the fire at Grey Terminal and what happened with Sabo. That Ace would eat the fruit, not so much to gain the cool power, but to take care of his little brother is so sweet.
This is a great story and Ace's characterization was spot-on! Great job!
| AndurilofTolkien chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
| EIRI-CHICK chapter 1 . 11/25/2015
| Wera chapter 1 . 10/21/2015
This was beautiful. It's such lovely idea behind Ace's power and really well written.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
Awwww! That reasoning and last part of that got to me!
| LittlemissLazy chapter 1 . 2/24/2015
The last three lines are Gold!
| Ujvari chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
| D chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
Okay, the most interesting and sorta sad thing about this is that if you reverse the meaning of the last three lines, in light of recent events, it still works
| FallenHope-Angel chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
That last line... The feels! My heart broke!
But it was good and it does make sense.
| Lady of the Shards chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
Awwwww…this was so sweet I teared up! And it totally fits with his personality too. I love it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
wow.. this is great :)
| Wolf and MR Lover chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
*cries* This is so cruel!
| mad100141 chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Ohhhhh. *hush* I think I'd like to tiptoe around this Ace now if you please. Niiiicee, well that's true. Luffy doesn't fear flames as shown in Punk Hazard.
| HuntingForReason chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
Oh my goodness, the last sentences were absolutely amazing. Very sweet story, loved it a lot.