|Reviews for Raising the Odds|
| guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
i love is one of my 's !
| chele the original chapter 6 . 8/29/2013
| chele the original chapter 5 . 8/29/2013
Well it's about
time Merlin. goof chapter,
| chele the original chapter 4 . 8/29/2013
sadness and confusion.
Hugs to Merlin.
| chele the original chapter 3 . 8/29/2013
are weird.I think
Arthur fancies Merlin.
| chele the original chapter 2 . 8/29/2013
Arthur, could you
make things anymore
awkward for Merlin.
At least Jenny was
nice about it.
| chele the original chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Good beginning .
lmfao with the
| axisofsymmetry chapter 6 . 8/6/2013
my favorite line by far:
"Don't tell me when you're about to start. I'm not going to look, just make it so – OH MY GOD, YOU'VE STARTED, SHIT SHIT SHIT!"
i laugh/cried so hard
about this whole story, really. like, wow serious heavy topic here and yet it was just so FUNNY in the first couple chapters. i mean honestly this is kind of exactly what id expect of real-life people. the devastation, the numbness, the idiot friends who make light of it and it actually kind of WORKS
so it was just like this teetering balance of serious/hilarious to the point that i was all but laughing with tears in my eyes and then it actually DID get serious but it ended all nicely and im rly happy?
like wow it was just such a great thing to read, especially since i was reeled in like a fish on the summary alone, and im really glad the story lived up to it
i cant honestly say i have any criticism for this story. i mean, this is a difficult subject to tackle in the first place, and for you to do that, and with such care, theres just nothing really to criticize on that front (and since i was so drawn into it, i probably hadnt noticed any glaring errors in it). seriously though it had a steady flow and a full story, and i cant say there were any spelling or grammar mistakes that stuck in my mind. maybe you could have fleshed out the ending a little more, but i was content with it so, eh.
on a side note, was this in any way based off that movie "fifty/fifty"? cuz that term was thrown around a few times and i just kept being reminded of that, not that i actually saw the movie. just wondering, i guess.
| KJ's Manuscript chapter 6 . 3/16/2013
Your writing style is amazing. I loved this story immensely.
| Magpie1600 chapter 6 . 3/12/2013
I'm a mess here. A weeping happy mess. I loved every damn word of it. Thank you so much.
| nannily chapter 6 . 3/10/2013
Aw, that was really sweet. :) I'm glad Merlin's healthy. :)
| Tricksterrs chapter 6 . 3/10/2013
Aww... I'm so glad Merlin didn't die :D This was an awesome story- Great job! :)
| LadyFromPoland chapter 6 . 3/10/2013
Aaawwww... That was so beautiful! You made me smile. :)
| bluespiritgal chapter 6 . 3/9/2013
| flyaway213 chapter 6 . 3/9/2013