|Reviews for Fragments|
| fleeting thought chapter 2 . 2/20/2013
I love this! I know its suppose to be just a oneshot, but I wish you would add on to this one. Loved it.
| kappikahMIKEY chapter 2 . 2/20/2013
wow just wow
love the first one, somehow it is just so sad but I don't know, I like the idea of Sakura by herself and traveling outside of Konoha. I do wonder though what she does after that?
I really really love the setting in the second one. Sasuke, you're such a charmer. XD
Great stories. Thanks for sharing them :D
| Akiiko-Chan chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
oh wow this left me wanting more.
| Akiiko-Chan chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
it broke my heart.
really nice ;-;
| Alyssa Michele chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
I really like this one! Do you think you could make a longer version of it as an individual story? :)
| Paradox Assassin chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
The first made me sad, the second made me laugh. I'm excited to see what will happen next chapter.
| sophialy chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
omg! please make a part 2 of this!
| crystal-gundam chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
"He'd honestly been trying to play nice and she ruined it."
heehee, somewhere in me decided I had to read that in sulky Sasuke tone of voice. except i guess he's 22 and has been fighting for so long ...hmm. that wouldn't really work. OH WELL. i miss these scenes - this way, i can imagine all i want about what happens next or what happened before ! although i will repeat what some people already have asked - will you be continuing some of these scenes ?
| The Scarlett Ribbon chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
Oh my god. This is so perfect. I am seeing so much of the siege of Troy here and it's fabulous, because holy cow, you do it well.
I hope there is more of this particular fragment?
| Kahli hime chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
| meantimegirl chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
Sasuke's gaze roved over her body, taking in the loose folds of her dress. He smirked. "Are you inviting me to search you, my lady?" MY FAVORITE LINE. Hahahahahahaha
I'm just surprised that this turned funny!flirty in the end when it seemed so ominous in the beggining. Still great though.
| zandehr chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
AHH.. LOVELY LOVELY prompts you have here..
| keiko-uchiha chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
The last part of this had me smile. I look forward to the rest!
| Nom de Plume chapter 2 . 2/18/2013
If drabbles are the only way you can write easily these days then by all means!
Once again, you leave us wanting more after each piece, and by the end we have to remind ourselves that these are just mere plot-bunnies whose tails are shown but whose heads shall be cut off until the next one pops in.
The first 'fragment' truly showed an interesting premise, never have I read a story where Sakura could no longer function as a shinobi- We all hear about stories with Sasuke losing his sight but Sakura?... To lose something that had kept her insecurities at bay & eventually made up her whole identity... it would make for some awesome angst & possible adventure-timez D;
And this one here... I've never been much of a fan of traditional/old-time literature but of course, you can modify anything and make it seem like the hottest thing on the block. A gentleman and a spunk with knives like a second skin, really, what more could we want (besides for you to keep writing&sharing your wondrous headless babies).
| A Recreant's Quiddity chapter 2 . 2/18/2013
You're the reason why I can't ever leave the SasuSaku fandom.
...And I'm more than okay with that.
(I hope you'll continue this prompt, it's entertaining as always!)