|Reviews for Infinite Stratos: Crimson Skies|
| Reclusive Dork chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
Can I give you an OC?
His Name is Luke Lincoln. He's from Ireland, so I guess he could be their representative. He has short messy golden brown hair, sharp forest green eyes, medium brow, a strong jaw, and a blackened scar across the back of his neck.
Luke is a mechanical genius, but not in the same way as other geniuses. He has a powerful research method: constant vigilance, risk everything, Look EVERYWHERE. He is much more creative in his theory research, so that he gathers plausible theories from the most ridiculous things- places NOBODY else would care to look. Luke is a modest boy most places, but he gets a bit arrogant in the workshop.
His personal IS is called Force Nova, and is a very dark green, almost Black, with white energy and rust orange highlights. the legs resemble a wolves, only more upright. the hands resemble a large dragon's claw on the left, and a knight's gauntlet on the right. it has no wing boosters, but instead there is a thick "mane" made of small generator towers that generate a gravitational field. however, if enough towers taken out, the gravitational field falls. And finally, the helmet resembles a wolf with two twisted horns pointed back. Luke Designed and built Force Nova himself, including the core. He has invented his own IS core, but it's a completely different style than Tabane's cores. and the materials are a lot less common. in comparison, Tabane's cores would be a Peregrine Falcon while Luke's cores would be a Marlin. Or more accurate, Tabane's would be a Western Dragon and Luke's would be an Eastern Dragon(They don't have wings-they swim in the air.)
It can generate condensed rapid fire energy beams of various degrees from the left hand and it has something similar to the original Ichika's sword(only with two 'Rails') that it can wield in the other. The Force Nova also has a boost mode called the Glory Star, in which the energy is so condensed the suit shines bright gold and forest green that enables the user to go up to Mach 2, that the attacks are Conductive, the attacks are much stronger. Also, a plasma booster pack in the feet and arms for acrobatic dodging/nimble dashing.
Force Nova's greatest ability is the power to charge it's attacks with electricity.
| Strovist chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
Please update soon. This story as a good level of potential:)
| uub chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Ummm,there's not much to say about your fic as it's a little premature to give my opinion you realy nead to separate your paragraphs if you want people to continue reading your fic as it's too hard to read in your current format so please hit the enter button after every couple of paragraphs.
Please don't take this personally,I hope for more good work & to see your plot in the future