|Reviews for Hail to the (Zero) Queen|
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/23
You've obviously never read familiar of zero Karin is a bit of a bitch while she loves her daughter's if she thought they were endangering crown or country shed gladly kill them and with a smile on her face thier father spoils them and would never hurt them though
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/22
Its derflinger not delfinger
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/22
The first couple chapters are good but then it gets really crappy
| IansInsane chapter 3 . 5/28
Wait? Why is the fight happening again?
| IansInsane chapter 2 . 5/28
This is awesome!
| SalemTheSpeakerOfTruth chapter 4 . 4/25
Why would a Zerg want to follow Terran convention by naming things? Zerg are not divided by names; they are all The Swarm.
| KhazintheDark chapter 12 . 4/2
That, is a long time for it to make contact. Has it been searching for the whole time Elliot has been there?
| Red Death chapter 5 . 3/15
You need to separate your dialogue. Every time someone new speaks, start a new paragraph. In this chapter, your dialogue is virtually unreadable. It's almost impossible to tell who's speaking at any given time.
| goodpie2 chapter 4 . 2/1
Wait. I'm confused. What's an Erebus? I thought that was the name of the brood.
| Reishin Amara chapter 12 . 6/6/2014
Kickass...I should've read this sooner.
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/10/2014
I like the story so much including the new units for the Swarm. I was surprised that Eliiot was a retired Ghost operative. Looks like Albion chose the wrong country in the wrong time. And I also love the Heavy Wind and the Queen of Blades being friends, it reminds me of someone. Anyway, I would love to see how it ends. 3
P.S. Louise and Kerrigan are the most badass master and familiar EVER!
| kiyang064 chapter 7 . 4/3/2014
I dropped reading at this point because the story lost my interest. I was hoping for a more secretive, and daresay evil, version of Kerrigan like in the first few chapters, but guess that wasn't your plan. Good luck on your writings.
| davycrockett100 chapter 12 . 3/30/2014
| Kaore Ryu chapter 8 . 2/13/2014
i did some looking up on the ultralisk and have to say... its MASSIVE!
5 meters tall and 20 meters long equals 16 feet tall and 65 and a half feet long
| x-marks-the-spot1974 chapter 12 . 1/28/2014
this is a fantastic story, i hope to read more