Reviews for Infinity
pretty-little-gymnast chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
This is just so amazeballs :D Perfectly heartbreaking, just wonderful.

Sorry for the short review, but I just need a moment to bask in the glory of this fic. Btw, I discovered a song that I haven't heard in forever because of this as well. 9 Crimes by Damien Rice ;)
bethespark chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Oh I like it! Write more please
Forget-To-Breathe chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
:O Woah...

This one-shot was soooooo good, I loved it :)
thehazeleyedloser chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
great job!
Bloodredfirefly chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Hug! I like hugs:-)

Oh, this was sooo cool. I like how the ending was a bit... left there, open ended - you don't say what he's going to do, what's going to happen, because that's good. It leaves it to our imaginations. And I just loved the writing style, it was very different for you, the plot was out of this world. (And I love the XX - I congratulate you on brilliant musical tastes).

It's funny how I knew Prim was younger, but never keyed into her being sixteen vs twenty-two, I just assumed like Gale that she MUST be twenty. I have to go (I should have been up twenty minutes ago... yikes) but this is really, really awesome and I cannot do it justice. Keep going!
ldanielle chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
I LOVED it! It was sososososo good! My fab one shot I've ever read for sure!
Radio Free Death chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Yep, I was also skeptical.

For good reason. Most romance stories aren't my thing since they're poorly written and romance alone can't drive a plot. It could work as a one-shot, so I thought I'd give this story a chance.

It's not bad. The dialogue and interactions with the characters flow without it being forced or trying too hard. It could do with some imagery and metaphor-it is written quite literally. There were moments where Gale came off too strong, like forcing himself with kisses until 'consent' was given so that wasn't really good. The ending was a bit weak. It lacked proper closure and there wasn't the uncomfortable vibe when Gale realizes his mistake.

It has very little to do with HG though so why not just tweak it a little and get it published as original fiction?

Still, good job!
angels entwined chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
I read this a few hours after it came out - and mentioned so, I believe - but I didn't review. D:

I'd love to fangirl insanely, but that's not an adequate review, so.

I didn't see any grammar/spelling mistakes. (Actually, there might have been a few I already forgot about, anyway.) I personally think this should be rated M, but I'm not picky. Anyway -

This was beautiful. This really was. ;_; (I would have left that one emoticon as a review, but then I'd feel lousy.)

I remember I was a little confused at the beginning, and for a moment in the second part, I thought Prim was the redhead and happened to dye her hair. XD /I'm kind of glad she wasn't

The ending was fantastic and tragic, but not in the popular everyone-dies way. (Which I actually don't mind, but everyone dying is a bit overused.)

I adored Prim's portrayal. I can totally see her being like this. (Mainly because Prim needs more detail in canon, but 90 percent of the canon characters need more detail. ;-;)

I don't know why I didn't favorite this, but I'll assume my mind refuses to let me click the favorites button. It isn't really my type of fic (though I ship GalePrim, certainly :P).

Poor Gale's luck and poor Jess/Prim. ;_;

;_;

;_;

C YOU LUCKY DUCK

- Twilly
Monkey0 chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
PIKA PIKA PIKA PIKA PIKA PIKA PIKA PIKA PIKA PIKA PIKA PIKA PIKA PIKA PIKA PIKA PIKA
Amazing Job Nina!
ur bubby monkey
PrettyLittleFuhrmanizer chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Actually really good i dot usaully ship these 2 I knida do now really great jod could you check out some of my stories?Catoloverxclovelover
memingers chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
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THIS IS TOO MUCH OMG NINA JUST STOP MAKING FEEL ALL THESE FEELINGS OMFG
AND IT TAKES PLACE IN NYC WHICH IS LIKE THE BEST CITY IN THE UNIVERSE
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Amulet Misty chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Oh dear xD whenever I read/watch awkward/tense moments like these I groan, turn away from the screen and yell 'nooo...o.e'.It's a reflex now...

Anyway, that was a messed up but interesting storyline. Ironic too. Gale...your luck sucks. If Katniss ever found out...-cringes-. Yep. Okay I'm done.

Only great stories get me worked up like this xD
finnickcanyouknot chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
I'M DYING FROM FEELS HELP

i seriously cannot put into words how brilliant this is. first of all, it's galeprim and yeah can i say otp. i really wasn't expecting a galeprim 'cause i know how a lot of people are weirded out by it, which i thought was a shame because the prompts are MADE for galeprim. BUT BUT BUT you did galeprim, and seriously i feel so much love for you right now it's not even real. seriously this hug is gonna be a death squeeze out of love on my part

BECAUSE THERE IS THIS BRILLIANT FANTASTIC AMAZING GALEPRIM FIC AND IT'S DEDICATED TO ME AND I JUST CAN'T BELIEVE IT AND ACTUAL TEARS OF JOY RN GAH

seriously i was so down 'cause yikes stress and this has just like brightened my whole year

i keep re-reading it because gah it's galeprim and they're perf and your writings perf and it just fits the prompts so well

okay. reasons it is perf, like there needs to be a reason 'cause JUST LOOK AT IT but yeah -

- i'm actually planning on doing a galeprim!fic where they meet when katniss brings gale home, but it doesn't get much more complex than that but you've just taken that idea and BLOWN it out of the water yesh and i bow down to your greatness

- i'm like obsessed with the whole trying to replace someone with someone else. i love those types of stories. and when you were describing how he'd made katniss into prim it was just done so well and so much more

- "Katniss could never know about Jessica Monroe." . . . oh my God such a powerful yet simple ending line and i love how you used the fake name like they're two seperate people and i want to put into words how i interpeted it but my brains all muddled

ONE FAULT

/sniff sniff

IT'S INFERRED HE'S JUST GONNA CARRY ON WITH KATNISS EVEN THOUGH HE SAW INTO PRIM'S SOUL AND THIS MAKES ME SAD

but at the same time the ending is why i love this so conflictions

but i'm just gonna continue on my delusion that galeprim happen at some point in the future. i mean this totally has multi-chap potential. - hint, hint. - but at the same time i thought it was ended perfectly and i don't want that spoiled and gah i'm confusing myself now

okay sorry if i sound insane. i have a cold and i'm high on dr pepper and i've had like no sleep so i'm off it. so i love you and you have my eternal servitude and HUGS TIMES A MILLION
irmaida chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Gahhh I don't ship Gale/Prim. But your writing is phenomenal as always and it just drew me in. It was amazing and I don't regret reading it.
Ellenka chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Oh, Gale, the odds just keep playing you, don't they? ;P
But wow, this was very interesting. I love the au scenario, and since Prim knew what she was doing, it didn't come across as creepy. And you writing style is beyond amazing - just perfect balance of succinct and beautifully flowing. Great work :)
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