Reviews for Obvious
TheCauldron chapter 1 . 11/2/2014
*grin* this was adorable!
Liven chapter 1 . 1/23/2014
Oh ! I forgot to say that I also liked the way you kept the smut simple. Nothing too graphic. It didn't felt like a porn so another good point for you ;D
(This shi*** website wouldn't let me post the review with my account, seeing I already posted one on this chapter.. Not cool..)
Liven chapter 1 . 1/23/2014
Well, what can I say? This was good. Like reeeaaaaally good ! I loved how Sherlock reacted, all confused, and John thinking Sherlock didn't want him anymore, when obviously it was just the opposite. And I loved how, for once, Anderson and Donovan don't act like complete dicks. This change for all the things I've read until now, and I gotta say it's a good change. So thank you for that.
Lots of love,
Liven.
TheTruthInYourEyes chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
"Did anybody see that? I wasn't doing anything! (yada yada)" ...made me laugh so hard, lol! I really love embarassed John when it comes to this. :DD
And next: "...and does it require me to put on pants?" And Lestrade's respond ... Oh my! ;))
You're so good! lol!
Kokoroyume chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
Nice story :)
Desdemona Morrisa Raine chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
LOL! I loved it! "Do I need pants?" That's just too much!
starrysummernights chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
I giggled and blushed like a fangirl. Lovely story- LOVED embarrassed Sherlock there at the end.
Someonefromthefuture chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
The idea of Sherlock melting, and saying please - I know John prayed for a miracle, but the greatest miracle in Sherlock's case is not coming back from the dead :) So what I'm trying to say is you're brillant. Absolutely brilliant!
NJung chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
You, my dear friend, should consider writing more like this one! w
lirodendron chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Very cute bit of fluff! )
Tuturne chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Great fanfic! I like the way you got their relationship starting so it couldn't have been a better choice for my first reading on Sherlock fandom! Thanks for that (Short review cause I'm not english, sorry...)