yes just yes i loved it. couldn't keep the smile off my face

It was one of the best story I've ever read ! Really, it was really well written ! Everything was perfect, the evolution of the relationship between naruto and kakashi, the way you wrote them and THAT LEMON OH MY GOD !
I really got attached to them thanks to the time you've passed writting about their feelings and mind set !
In a lot of story I've read there too much sex (or too fast) or too much adventure and we lost the romance of the story. Yours was balanced perfectly !
I'm on my way to read your others stories !
Sorry if I made mistakes in English it's not my first language :)

Wow, so good

i think thats like top 3 lemons i have ever read. and mind you i love erotic fiction and have over 500 faved fics on just FF... i know my yaoi okay and DAYM! half the time im dying of laughter and next im flustered, hot, panting of lust cause i feel what you describe and its so vivid in my head. best seen has to be narutos solo ik the shower, god damnit i laughed each time he hit his prostate and i mean... comedy that doesnt ruin my mood in a lemon? it pure art. damnit you are a godess of fiction. five chappies left and im even reading the authour notes cause you are damn hilarious!

This story is the most heart felt. You are a genius in writing styles. I was so captivated by this story, that I had to read it twice. The scenery was easy to imagine. I don’t have a imagination but your spectacular writing has allowed me to imagine it. It’s beautiful. Please write more stories about this pairing, I find there aren’t enough good stories written about them. I love this pair so much!

LMAO, I DIDN'T EXPECT THAT

You're a wonderful and graphic writer. From the moment I started reading this story, I couldn't help but admire how romantically you used language. For anyone that thought that this scene that you wrote was bad (because of that uke and seme trope) they don't understand how actual passion works, this was a very realistic piece on how sex actually works in real world.

I think in the future if you haven't already published a real story you would make a powerful novel!

Is this a nightmare? I feel like he's having a nightmare

Okay that was really great! Also I’m only a little sad cause they never actually said they liked or loved each other but I guess anyone could tell they loved each other though. Ooh why didn’t you do the lemon when it was Naruto’s birthday! But my god I really loved reading this Fan Fic I’m totally gonna recommend this to my Fanjoshi friends to read.

Every once in a while, I come back to this fic and read it again. What an intense writing style.

AND AGAIN NNNN AAAA 5AM
I'm definitely re reading this fic some time soon ;-;7 it was beautiful. All the journey. The characterization and setting of causes, effects and circumstances are aaaah
Such a wonderful plot. Writing full of detail. Ah. Marvellous. Even more than that
Loved it all. So happy having read it. I've spent a wonderful time reading it. Thank you so so sooomuch

AHHHHH SOOO BEAUTIFUL AKAKFJSMDKDJSJDBE TEALLY LOVED IT AAAAWWWWWWW
Beautiful. Lovely. That kitchen scene hmm S

LOVE THE FICCC OMG I ALSO FORGOT COMPLETELY THERE WERE DESERTS FOR EACH CHAPTER XD
AAAAAAA
THIS IS ITTTTT THIS FIC HAS IT ALL AAAAAAAAAA FROM KAKASHI DAYDREAMING ABOUT NARU AND HE RAISING LIL GENNIN TO KAKASHI BEING BEAT THE HELL OUT OF HIM FOR THE HUGE PROBLEMATIC OF THEIR RELATIONSHIP AJDNSNKDKAKZKEKEK Naru you beautiful, sweet and pure fuzz of light. Nobody deserves you. But surely they can fight through the fire and the flames for your love. Yes. Gosh.

IF ONLY THEY KNEW!
XD AAAAAAAAH POSSESSIVE KAKASHI
ALSO YES GODDAMN YESSSSSS BOTH ACHE FOR EACH OTHER. SO. BAD
AAAAAAAAAAAH

Dangerous wild animal XDDDDD
AAAAAAAAAH THAT DEAD EYED -Yes- ALSO SCARED ME TO DEATH OMGGGGG KAKASHI YOU BASTARD