|Reviews for Furs|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2017
You need to work on your grammar and punctuation.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/12/2014
I bet the Arken stone that Fili and Kili where in the bushes watching
| janet1982 chapter 1 . 7/29/2014
sweet and cute )
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
I loved this! It's genius, absolute genius! I LOVE IT!
| DarkIceAngelFlare chapter 1 . 2/3/2014
comma splice, bad grammar, incorrect syntax - these were the reasons why I could not get past the first paragraph of your story. Sorry
| Arcturus Black chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
What the person above me said.
It seems like it could be an awesome story, but there are so many grammatical errors, I can't get through it.
Just find someone to Beta it, and you will be all set! :D
| BettaPen chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Great one-fic and I enjoyed the plot you brought into your story. _
| bathtubs of liquor chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
This was great!
(Your possessive/owning, as in "your hat", meaning that it is owned by one specific person and no one else. You're you are. as in "you're a writer" or "you're a Hobbit")
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
I like it!
| vampygurl402 chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
| DMHPluv chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
I feel like this had the potential to be an awesome fic but there are so many grammatical errors and it missing words that it took away from the story. Keep on writing but I would recommend a beta next time.