Reviews for Chocolate
KOWritesIt chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
Aww...So sad story!
DokidokiMariel46 chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
Somehow, that was really painful...even though it was fluffyish. It hurt my kokoro, because izaya was like LOOVEEEE MEEEE, but from afar DDD":
KingKagura chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
I think this story is great! I wish you made a continuation for it, though. Like how Shizuo is gonna give Izaya something on white day and how Shizuo found out Izaya gave it to him
Tanto Storm chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
Sorry for your loss. My great aunt died recently. I really loved the story and even though you said it was a one shot I think you should continue it. It was really good but I don't think is finished yet.
Ashley chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
Please consider making a second chapter that Shizuo finds out and then it's not one-sided, please consider.
AnonShizayafan chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Awwweee Its soo cute but so sad TAT. Its a beautiful story. Poor Izaya.
Bloom Flower chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
I hope you are doing better. Welcome back!
forever-yaoi-lover chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
Great story! _
Author-chama chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
Good story!

\(;n;)/ OMG HUGZ! ;A; that is so sad! I'm sorry for you and your family, I hope everything is better soon, that must be tough.
LoOrihara chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Such a sweet little story! Loved it :)
heyalove43 chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
aww damn girl im sorry about your loss
i lost my aunt a couple days ago 2
i know its not nearly as bad as what your going through but...
it sucks.
ANYWHO
on to a happier note.
i loved the story it was sooo cute :)
i love how shinra knew that it was izzy :D
but he has a point shizuo wouldnt believe him if he knew that izzy gave him the chocolates and that izzy likes him :D
ANYWHO
i cant wait to read more of your stories :)
sooo till the next time we chat i bid you adieu :)
JezebelStrike chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
*le gasp* Oh but.. nah he probably wouldn't so that's why there is the fact that you would run up to him and plant one on him then jump out the way. The shock would cause Shizuo to freeze leaving Izaya a few seconds to dash away.
Boom. Simple.
Poor Izaya doesn't know that though.
I liked it. Ahh, what a nice thing to read before I go to bed.
LolitaPrincessLove chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Awww its so sad yet so cute
blackirishawk chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
I believe you izaya! Lol
felisceleris chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Aww poor izaya. This would make a great multi chapter story.
Sorry for your loss. Getting through that will take time as Im sure you know.
Glad you are writing again.
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