Reviews for Birth of the Forest
Guest chapter 3 . 8/8/2015
Why is this tagged as a Naruto fic when it's clearly a hashirama fic
Spyrkle10 chapter 22 . 8/5/2015
Awesomeness. Awesomeness everywhere. Except for grammar. Did you know that a dialogue sentence ends in a comma, like "This," and punctuation goes before the dialogue mark? I hope the Narushima/ Haruto issue is solved eventually. Also, I hope Kushina lives. Maybe bring Minato back? Pain could have Orochimaru Edo Tensei Minato back for a five minute period to inspire Kushina to work harder and then Naruto could burst in with Mito and whisk Minato away, show him the technique that Mito used to revive herself, and voila! Living Minato! All planned out by Mito and Narushima/Haruto. Of course, for balance this could result in some sort of terrible depressing setback, but still...
SaucyHandles chapter 1 . 8/1/2015
No idea why but the mood in this part of the story felt like it woulda went a bit differently. Maybe like,

"NARUTO, YOU INATTENTIVE LITTLE BRAT! TELL ME, WHY WAS SENJU HASHIRAMA THE MOST FEARED NINJA ON THE BATTLEFIELD OF THE FIRST WAR?"

Naruto scratched his head…"Well, he could do a lot of powerful jutsus?"

A tic mark appeared on Iruka's visage. The class sniggered at Naruto, Kiba Inuzuka taking particular pains to mock the dead last.

"Idiot! He could do a lot of powerful jutsu..." he mocked in a singsong voice.

"SHUT UP DOGGY!" Naruto yelled. Iruka blew up yet again: "QUIET!"

Unsurprisingly the class quieted down. "Naruto, you will read up on the Shodai Hokage and give us all a detailed presentation on his life tomorrow, without fail! DO I MAKE MYSELF CLEAR SOLDIER?!" shouted Iruka, slipping back into another bout of his PTSD, before deftly proceeding to beat the living HELL outta Naruto to set an example to his other soldiers in training.

Naruto whimpered in a comical fashion, as he lay there on the ground a beaten mess. Iruka could be just SO mean sometimes! With a pained grunt, he slowly crawled his way back to his desk, trying his best to ignore the sniggering of the other students at his current sorry state.

Really, It wasn't his fault that Iruka would slip back into his 'war mode' as they'd dubbed it, everytime he would mess up in class... Or been late... Or talked back... Or done just about anything now that he thought about it...

Oh well, what could ya do? It's just the way things were, and apart from the sting of each strike, it made the other students laugh and notice him, so at the end of the day it wasn't a big deal. He took pride in his ability to be the class clown!

Though, now that he sat twitching slightly in his chair, as Iruka continued to dron on and on about the hostory of Konaha, he had to wonder just HOW was to study history without books, seeing as the proprietors of the library always found an excuse to refuse him entrance. Dang, he'd probably have to buy them a gift basket or something. They apparently didn't take being pranked too kindly he supposed.

Now that he thought of it, just how the HELL was he going to WRITE the damn thing? Hed have to get help probably, as with each comical convulsion his body made it was clear he couldnt do it all alone.

His musings were cut short by as he called the class to the front to follow him for meditation exercises.

How ironic?

Anyways think I got carried away here xD
Anonymous chapter 22 . 7/27/2015
Jaw dropping... The balance of God and bad things happening is good right now be careful with naruto's/hashirama's balance of good and bad things it's getting a little dark. The plot is amazing you've kept the big plot things like the 3 years away and gaara being captured, but made it come out with your ending. Keep up the good work! And please post as soon as you can.
Anon chapter 22 . 7/25/2015
This story is absolutely amazing, hands down my favorite fan fiction of all time, please, please, please update this, not doing so is doing this amazing story and your creative genius dis justice.
Response to rant chapter 21 . 7/19/2015
How can you say that when your entire fanfiction is basically a giant "Who can be the biggest Mary Sue?" clusterfuck?
Guest chapter 6 . 7/19/2015
It's not right for Naruto or should I SAY, Hishiramama to basically possess/take over Naruto and live again and not Naruto and now, he's even refusing to love another girl just becuz his PAST LIFE..That's NOT RIGHT! It's wrong to force a past life's into Naruto's. HOW can yo do this..It's disgusting. This is basically Hishirame instead of Naruto.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/19/2015
How is this Naruto when it's basically Hishrama TAKING over/POSSESSING Naruto now. It's not Naruto or even sharing it's possession now..
Sanshuou Hanzo chapter 22 . 7/15/2015
Its good. Its real good.
sly kitsune9 chapter 5 . 7/8/2015
Of you're going to write a fanfiction in ENGLISH then write it in ENGLISH
OutOfReality08 chapter 6 . 7/2/2015
Naruto x mito, now it's getting really good.
OutOfReality08 chapter 1 . 7/2/2015
Yeah, great first chapter. Please make more.
DeadBottle chapter 22 . 7/1/2015
Although I don't think i'm masterful enough to come up with a compelling ending to the Kushina storyline. I am more than qualified to tell you that this story is quite good. I hope you realize that and continue on.
Heika chapter 5 . 6/24/2015
Ch1
what happened to his mom?

Why do the ANBU only have one nature affinity?

Mito could sense emotions.

Sounds like sennin training

He was only the second God of Shinobi though and the first and true God of Shinobi makes him look average.

Wasn’t Sage Chakra gold?

and regain a considerable amount of my old

why is EVERYONE barely acknowledging his genetic change? His eyes changed color. That should have made EVERYONE think “who can change genetics of people?…OROCHIMARU OH FUCK!” or something along those lines. They are failures as intelligent sapient beings let alone shinobi.

Ch2
The Jounin had about as much chakra as he did before his awakening
In canon, Kakashi at this point had half Naruto’s chakra reserves.

Does Naruto still have his wind affinity?

So is it Nature Ryuu or Nature Ken: Nature Style and Fist respectively?

It was partially a Nintaijutsu style (more Sentaijutsu)

but those who abandon their friends are worse than trash
the line was comrades and I heavily suggest using it. You don’t have to be friends with who you work with after all. If they only never abandon their friends many could still be left for dead anyway.

Shouldn’t Naruto have told Saru that Tazuna was lying? He already knows Naruto can sense emotions from great distances after all.

Ah, if he is using moku chakra than it is Nintaijutsu.

Asu?

Ch3-5
That would take him at least another three to four years, by which time he estimated that his old capacity too would return.
He told the Kyuubi a few months in chapter1.

But that would have aroused suspicions among shinobi that a Mokuton user walked the lands again.
Like a grown, living wood bridge would not have already done so.

Will Sasuke get his memory as Madara like Naruto got Hashirama?

Hashirama was not called the God of Shinobi
He was called it like his student was.

for that duration will happen in a single instant of the flow of time in the world outside, effectively sealing the required conversation completely from the outside world…"
Kakashi looked at the clock, which had frozen. But on close observation with Sharingan he could see that the second-hand was moving very slowly
If it is moving it will not necessarily be an instant in the outside world if he kept it up long enough

potential and had invented the Hiraishin no jutsu as a teenager
Tobirama invented it. Minaro RE-invented it…kind of anyway. Saying he re-invented it is overkill but the in the correct area of thought.

Her being soaked in blood also would have built up the image of Red Death cannot kill that many people with a sword and escaped the bloodshed.

utterly as NARUTO’S ten thousand shockwave
10000 what?

Yugito, Samui and Omoi
No all girl team T_T KARUI! lol

until the user's will FAILS

"The same…Hashirama cannot be resurrected
I always wondered how he could be resurrected in canon when he had already been reincarnated thus any resurrection should have killed Naruto to get his soul.

How did your stronger Sakura tie with Ino?

with a powerful fire affinity and a stunning affinity to water.
So which is greater?

Only A major part

Great job!
theman1111 chapter 22 . 6/17/2015
UPDATE! I love this story can we get some Naruto and Mito fluff
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