Reviews for Birth of the Forest
torgrim chapter 9 . 3/6/2013
You have given these reviews more time than they deserve, you were very clear what Mito did with the edo tensei, honestly these reviews sounded pointless just forget them and go with what you are doing.
Guest chapter 9 . 3/6/2013
supert history
Bravo chapter 9 . 3/6/2013
keep up the good work man and don't let those few reviews out there that are negative get to you, its YOUR story not there's if they want Mito or any other character to be different then let them start there own story and see how it goes for them. anyway don't let those people change the way you write cause it is excellent and there's no reason to change for one or two unpleasable people :D thanks for taking the time to write this story i look forward to reading it far into the foreseeable future. peace (0_0)
Ame no Kagaseo chapter 9 . 3/6/2013
I personally think that a hot redhead like mito would do Mr. Overflowing-with-will-of-fire Naruto a lot of good ! Every great man needs his equally great (and ofcourse hot) woman. So keep up the good work!
mfmxxx chapter 9 . 3/6/2013
Been disapointed twice now with updates that werent updates :(
Flying Raijin chapter 6 . 3/6/2013
"Hashirama-kun made me promise never to research this technique further, as its price was death. It is an incomplete counter to Edo Tensei, and its price for bringing back a soul from the pure world is death for the caster…"

Then why didn't Orochimaru die right there?

Or you mean the caster of the counter-Edo?
CreatorZorah chapter 9 . 3/6/2013
Hmm... I enjoy your story, but, please, stop doing this. It's against the rules:

-The chapter system is not to be used as placeholder for non-story content such as author notes. You can add short author notes to the beginning or at the end of stories but never as individual chapters.

The vast majority of the readers won't read your notes anyway. If you want to tell selected individuals something, then just use PM. Otherwise use beginnings/ends of your chapters...
angelrey chapter 9 . 3/6/2013
I like very much your story and i can bit wait to see de searh for Tsunade
Anubis chapter 8 . 3/6/2013
This is one of the best stories in fanfic. Also i think in manga also we are going to see something similar with naruto. But instead of Hashirama's reincarnation he is going to be sage of six paths. Anyway waiting for the next chapter. Hopefully you would update it soon.
hector chapter 8 . 3/5/2013
escribes bien continua escribiendo
Monkeyman1ksl chapter 8 . 3/5/2013
Need more chapters its awesome:D
anarion87 chapter 8 . 3/6/2013
great story so far
Redstone.LILI chapter 8 . 3/5/2013
when are u planning to update?
DivergenceMagic chapter 7 . 3/5/2013
Nice chapter and it feels like the characters are all natural. Also, I like how Hashirama is acting. I totally agree with you that an abused child and a legendary shinobi merging together is going to take a bit of time for new quirks to develop. After all, if Naruto was practically ignored than he would rely on his Hashirama persona to carry on the day and bring him comfort as a shinobi that was loved. I like how he absolutely destroyed Iwa for being so arrogant and they are personally screwed. The Akatsuki when you think it about it are also screwed because Mokuton from the original wielder is going to overpower even Pein as his bodies aren't as strong as the original and he's crippled. It's no wonder that Kurama would respect him as a descendant of the sage as well as revere him for being of the few men that could possibly beat him.
Update soon as I like this story.
Clearhorse chapter 8 . 3/5/2013
amazing story please update soon.
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