Reviews for Birth of the Forest
Mira Gen chapter 8 . 3/8/2013
Ooh interesting chapter, seems Akatsuki is moving... Haha wonder how will Tsunade will react with this revelations.
Pls do update soon! Keep it up... Yeah!
Please Read my stuff chapter 8 . 3/8/2013
love it please please update soon
Sechrima chapter 7 . 3/8/2013
This review is actually for chapter 8. For some reason thinks I already reviewed it, though I'm pretty sure I didn't.

Ah, this chapter was good. A lot happened, the plot developed significantly, many characters got their chance to shine (Kakashi's Kamui vs. Itachi's Amaterasu was awesome), and you've started building up the Akatsuki as a potential threat to Naruto in the near future. Good stuff.

There's just one thing I want to say. Naruto has wrought some very dramatic changes to this 'timeline', so things should go very differently from canon. At this point, if you re-tread canon events in your story, it just won't make sense and will be boring to read. You need to put yourself in the shoes of all the different characters and think how history would be forged differently with this Hashirama!Naruto running around, wiping out Iwa armies with Mokuton, etc. Also, the fact that both Kushina and Mito are alive will surely change many things. So basically, do not be afraid to create your own, original plot from this point on.

I was glad to see that Sasuke intends to train very hard with Naruto to get stronger. The trip to find Tsunade should be the ideal time for them both to do some training. Sasuke is supposed to teach Naruto the Great Fireball Technique sometime, after all. And I'll be interested to see how this Shunshin!Sasuke further develops his skills. Shunshin on its own is very cool, but he should probably add some other abilities to it soon.

Looking forward to another update!
SilverIcy chapter 8 . 3/8/2013
Tsunade has no idea what hit her, did she? since Jiraiya and Naruto took Sasuke with them, he's going to confront Itachi about real truth behind Uchiha massacre? i'm interested in how Itachi react when he found out that sasuke knew a real truth? can't wait to find out next chapter! great chapter as always!
Guest chapter 8 . 3/8/2013
at the end there you messed maito gai's color up hes green not blue lol but good chapter
mfmxxx chapter 8 . 3/8/2013
Awesome chapter.

Mito saying "Konoha owes us" seems like one of those typical Konoha bashing fics with Uzumakis as the main clan in the world... Hope it wont turn out like that as this is my favorite fic atm!
McCabeRz chapter 8 . 3/8/2013
Great chapter!
obscurereader chapter 8 . 3/8/2013
...isn't Gai the green beast?
Mas2009 chapter 8 . 3/8/2013
hope you update sooner next time your story is really a good piece of art; no flatery or exageration I like it every chapter and it"s rare to find in fics so continue the good work!
Ppsh chapter 8 . 3/8/2013
Great to see a 'real' update. Interesting to see Akatsuki making a move as well, I'm curious how it'll go down between Naruto & Itachi this time. I felt like Itachi was a little too disinterested last time they met, in the Wave mission, considering Naruto pretty much owned Kisame and he's only supposed to be like 12 or 13 years old. But I expect his approach will be different this time.
xXxSad KitsunexXx chapter 7 . 3/8/2013
I have just finished reading what you have so generously wrote up to this point, and can only say one thing about it. Brilliant, just plain stunning. Please, keep up the great work, looking forward to more.
User Profile chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
I love it I hope he spreads peace and that Sasuke and his wife is with him
AnFan-n-More chapter 6 . 3/7/2013
I somehow find it unlikely that Shinigami is ambivalent about the developments in your story :)

Bad reaction to disruptions of the norm, or good reaction due to reduced boredom it just seems unlikely that it's ambivalence.
AnFan-n-More chapter 4 . 3/7/2013
I really really really really hope that you plan on having Naruto and Sasuke develop a healthy and true friendship unlike Madara and the First! (can't remember how to spell his name) Otherwise it's just a retelling of the start of Konohoe, which would suck.

You are doing a good job so far at providing the basis of a strong friendship.
kroz phantomville chapter 7 . 3/7/2013
This story is Fucking Fabulous. It was the best Mokuton-Naruto fanfic I have ever read. You have portrayed the true power of Mokuton. I always felt that the other fanfics made out mokuton to be nothing more than glorified tree growing. Mokuton is totally bad ass by itself but Harashima takes it to new levels. Excellent work. Keep it up. Waiting for meeting with Tsunade. Can you make Naruto act more like a kid?
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