Reviews for Sekhmet's Broken child
rachel.weck.5 chapter 7 . 4/14
Has potential... but feels rushed
Oracion de las Estrellas chapter 5 . 2/24/2014
Julius' group has the blue eyes white dragon, Yami's group has Slifer the Sky Dragon, Marik's group has the Winged Dragon of Ra, and Akefia's group has the Red Eyes Black Dragon.
ultima-owner chapter 7 . 2/18/2014
hope they that the news well
changeofheart505 chapter 7 . 2/18/2014
Kura: Whoa...
Sakura: Nice chapter.
Jostanos chapter 6 . 5/20/2013
YOU PASS!

'Sunglasses'? XD

She didn't even need to use the ink on the eye lens trick!
changeofheart505 chapter 6 . 5/20/2013
Kura: He got a black eye, didn't he?
Sakura: We waited a long time for this, and I didn't expect this little twist.
Kura: Me either, can't wait for the next chapter!
Jostanos chapter 5 . 4/18/2013
YOU PASS!
FLAWLESS VICTORY!

The Shadow Realm? Romania? a Deck of Dragon Cards?
Eggs?
changeofheart505 chapter 5 . 3/21/2013
Sweet! New items!
SailorNova007 chapter 5 . 3/14/2013
what's harry's item
Yoruko Rhapsodos chapter 5 . 3/14/2013
Note one: you leave it hard to tell who has what items. Note two: Who will Akafia be paired with?
Saffron-Rose chapter 3 . 2/22/2013
Please update soon. This is quite interesting so far. Are Harry and Akefia going to be friends with Draco as well or just the Ishtar twins?
paili-chan chapter 3 . 2/18/2013
Wait, so when child social servces took away Malik because of the scars, why didn't they take Draco as well? If the Ishtar household was bad for a kid Malik's age, why didn't CSS try and take Draco away too since he's still just as underaged as Malik was?

Plus why the heck did they take Malik away because of OLD scars? Whoever saw them had to be blind if they can't tell the difference between old scars and new ones.

I mean seriously, despite the OLD scars that are covering Maliks body, when the police and CSS came and dragged her away, they must have taken her to the hospital for a FULL physical to find out just how serious the scars are, and find out that despite the OLD scars that cover her body, there isn't a single FRESH new scar or bruise or anything else to indicate that she was STILL being abused by her family.

Yet they just came and dragged Malik away and put her into foster care without discovering why she's in the condition she's in, or letting her legally adult older siblings have her back. The one who was responsible for hurting Malik has been dead for YEARS, and just because people found signs of the OLD abuse that ALL of them went through, they're breaking up the family without giving them the chance to explain things or give them the chance to PROVE they are non-abusive good family that Malik can stay with, compared to the DEAD man who did abuse her?
Yoruko Rhapsodos chapter 3 . 2/20/2013
Stupid bratty twin ruining Julius Monrey's name... -.-#
changeofheart505 chapter 3 . 2/19/2013
I cried reading this chapter! It's so sad!
changeofheart505 chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
You changed the spelling in Bakura! Has anyone else ever done that?
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