|Reviews for The Demon's Fox|
| EvilCuttlefish chapter 2 . 3/30
I like your story so far, it has a good plot. There is one issue though, that is really bugging me, and that is the use of the honorific suffix that you use, the suffix -kun, is used for people of the male gender, -chan is used for the female gender, so unless Mira just happens to be a boy, it's a bit weird. Other than that it's good.
| Amidamaru88 chapter 2 . 5/14/2014
| Kaminari Senkou chapter 1 . 4/9/2014
Please update soon...
| Dclark101 chapter 2 . 10/10/2013
The guy that's doing this quit on us everyone
| NABBYCIS chapter 2 . 10/9/2013
Wil naruto learn take over magic chakra version? But good story so far keep it up
| Okumura Hikari chapter 2 . 7/29/2013
This story is really interesting! The demons r planning something bad aren't they? I really hope Mira makes it as a ninja! Pls update soon! And im in love with this story!
| Arai kaji chapter 2 . 7/15/2013
Will naruto learn take over magic and apply it to the Bijuu he faces. He could call it Takeover Bijuu soul.
| froger495 chapter 2 . 7/7/2013
cant wait for the next chapter.
| KokuenDG chapter 2 . 6/29/2013
So does this mean a smaller version of tailed beast mode? Maybe at like a one tailed scale or something, just enough to beat down on Neji.
He was able to beat him with misdirection and a small amount of Kurama's chakra last time, so I'm pretty sure he could win fairly easily at that point.
| curve-goddess chapter 2 . 6/28/2013
love this story so far cat wait to see more
| The 10th Wand chapter 2 . 6/27/2013
it'd be really fun if after they were done with Naruto's world, Mira figures out a way home but accidently takes Naruto with her. Not to mentioned its easy with how in fiction time can be bent easily where no time or only a very little went by in her world while time progressed normally in naruto's. Though I doubt you want to go that far with this story.
| Exanime Draco chapter 2 . 6/25/2013
I honestly thought that this story had been abandoned so I'm quite pleased to find out about this update. I hope you update it again soon and I'm looking forward to seeing the level of shock and/or disbelief from Mira and her demons when they learn Naruto essentially has the equivalent of the most powerful demon currently in existence from the elemental nations sealed within him. Additionally I also look forward to seeing how the two of them end up interacting with one another in addition to the seeing how things turn out with Mira and Fairy Tail.
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
FUCKING LOVE THIS SHIT READY FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER WHEN YOU'RE READY... cuz I got no life (forever alone) still love this though
| Xnekochix chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
Interesting chapter , i just hope that naruto will not stay a big idiot ! And for the love of god make him wear something else please ! Waiting next chapter impatiently !
| ddcj1990 chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
Great chapter I cant wait to find out how Naruto training with Mira will turn out