|Reviews for Ne m'oubliez pas|
| asukakizuno.p4s chapter 1 . 2/22
this story is touching me... *sob sob* i even translate that france word and the result is more touching me ever
| DokidokiMariel46 chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
DDD""": That was sooo good, sad but good. and you did well intertwining the french rev with the pairing :p. it was really unique and i liked it alot, despite the fact that otoya died TTwTT""""
| Kaila chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
This was really good, I cried, you portrayed the characters well.
| Kotori Yui chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
*O* Waaah! So beautiful!
| Kuroshiroryuu chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Reminds me of a vocaloid song... It was good though your writing style confused me a bit, maybe because my grammar's terrible! You made me teary so good work!
| Hope Woods 10 chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
So, I kind of tried to skip reading this because it was a tragedy, and low and behold, it made me cry. It was so well written that from the point that I realized who was dead tears started to swell in my eyes. The nostalgic way he speaks of what was and could have been is perfect. I also applaud you on your joining of real things into the story. I kind of was taught French by a woman from France, and you can believe I know more than I need to about the French Revolution. You tied everything together with the beautiful, poetic writing style that few people I know could pull off convincingly.
It Was Gorgeous.
Thank you for writing it.
| Ren-chan Jinguji chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
This story is so sad...it made me cry.../:'( I love the story but poor..poor Ittoki.../:'(
| OtoyanHikari chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
I find this weird-...but EVERY SINGLE awesome UtaPri fanfic I've ever legitimately /loved/...You've written. I read this one quite some time ago and I never knew you wrote it. Jesus. o-o
But yes! This one-shot was fantastic! Kinda sad...but absolutely fantastic! And so unique. o.o I thought I was being original with the WW2 UtaPri story I'm working on getting posted, [STARISH was forced into the army at the start of the war and they're defending Germany and Hitler, not the Allies and 'Murika.] but god, this is something I don't think anyone but you could ever come up with. XD Good job! Keep up the good work!
| Abi vi Britannia chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Such a good story so sad though! T.T I love the French Revolution and yaoi such a good combo
| Blue Rogue Linds chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
This was written much better than most of your works. You should consider sticking with this technique and style in the future. It works best for you, in my opinion. But there were some things about this that I just didn't find believable. Let's get down to business, shall we?
I could see if Otoya and Tokiya were of European descent that this kind of AU would work. But they're not. They're Japanese. On the other side of the ocean, to be specific. There weren't any Asian minorities living in France around the time of the Revolution. Not many, anyway. And they weren't granted citizenship if they were. Try writing them during the feudal era in Japan; there were plenty of wars then as well. I don't much care for shounen-ai, but whatever. That's your shtick. The setting just doesn't work here.