Reviews for His Little One
gwb620 chapter 8 . 7/27
Lol this story has great potential! I'm loving it so far and I'm hoping that this will be continued at some point.
Me chapter 1 . 7/14
Cana x nastu plus I mean it's rare that you see this pairing
NATZA FANGIRL chapter 4 . 7/8
i love your fanfiction plz make it natsu x erza :...( this fanfiction made me smile :( they would look so cut e together and you didnt change their character which was perfect your such a good writer and writers like you a rare to find for natza fanfictions hope u have a nice day keep up the good work :)
Zenith Relaxation chapter 8 . 7/9
I feel like a story like this shouldn't have become a harem. Treat me I love harems, I just feel that the way you set this up it should have been only one girl for Natsu.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/29
Hey man this is one of the best stories i've ever read. this story is awsome so i request you to please update some new chapters pleaseeee
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 8 . 6/20
Hope this updates soon:)
mmaallek chapter 8 . 6/18
Hehehe, at Gajeel.
mmaallek chapter 7 . 6/18
The lol's. I found this chapter really funny, however maybe you could add in a more protective Natsu? Like he would give even Erza the Evils if sshe was too loud near his daughter.

I really hope you do not plan on making this a full blown Harem? Because from the first few chapters you more or less made Erza the mother figure, plus it is best if Sakura only had 1 person she calls mother.
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 8 . 6/18
Hope You Update Again! Really Loving This Story :)
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 7 . 6/18
LOL! All Those Reactions :)
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 6 . 6/18
Hahahaha, Can't Believe Natsu Just Asked In Front Of the Whole Guild :)
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 5 . 6/18
Hahaha, Couldn't Stop Laughing At Gray!
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 4 . 6/18
LOL, Yup, Lucy's A Wierdo :)
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 3 . 6/18
Heck Yeah! You Go Natsu :)
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 2 . 6/18
Good Chapter!
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