Reviews for The First Archery Lesson |
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![]() ![]() ![]() so cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you! Thranduil definitely has to learn more about being a single parent. But this is a good start... And really cute to read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its so cute! i love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're use of commas needs some touching up but besides that it was a very sweet story with a lovely balance of fluff and a strong plot line. *virtual high five* |
![]() ![]() ![]() This isss sooooooooo ADOORABBLLEEEE... I'm loving "sweet and kind and fatherly" Thranduil! XD |
![]() ![]() Awww! So cute! Very nicle done, great imagery all the way through! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, that was so cute! Glad that Thranduil taught little Legolas archery. It made me so sad when Thranduil couldn't read Legolas a book because he was too busy. Gah, quiet Legolas is so sad. We like loud and energetic Legolas. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was so cute! I love little elfling Legolas and Thranduil stories. Also, I feel Legolas' pain, string slap hurts like a bi& *! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwwwww! It's so sweet! I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is so sweet... I always love Thranduil and Legolas interaction... |
![]() ![]() ![]() A soft-spoken little Legolas really could break anyone's heart (including mine TvT) set aside his own father. I love him in this fic of yours and I love how he loved his father, how thoughtful he was, not blaming his father for a second but blaming himself for not grow-up enough to have time with his father. And more than anything I love how Thranduil treasured his son, being so gentle and loving in every thought and every action. You did a wonderful job to pull out their love for each other, thank you a lot for your hard work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a wonderful story! Really touching, and I loved it a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cutecutecute! I love stories with young Legolas and his father. Good job. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adorable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohmygod! This story is fantastic! So sweet and heartwarming! Legolas' excitement was so cute :3 |