Daaawww! :3 I love good!Thanduil! I really like how you portray their relationship. ;)

aww, this warms my heart. :) i think you captured their relationship quite well. a bit of nitpicking though, i feel as though elves would probably come of age at around 100 or so, if we consider how old legolas is, and how old he appears to be. one more thing, although majority is spelled correctly, the proper word is maturity. nice fic. :)

I still love this story and I can see how your writing has improved!Great job!

This is too cute! Love it! :D

This was an awesome read! I really love how you described both, father and son, and their relationship.

Thranduil is a wonderfully balanced character in your story - a father as well as a king.

I have unfortunately not read the original piece but I can say that the story as it is now is a lovely work!

Thanks a lot for sharing.

This is a really good story. I like stories where Thranduil is kind to his son. I also like how he explained archery to his son. I am glad that you have given little Legolas a personality of a child instead of an adult, and that Thranduil treated him like a little child.