Reviews for Insanity
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Chaos.Started.It chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
Has anyone ever told you you're a really talented writer? Because you are. :)
Inklessquills chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
AWWW! I could totally see Enobaria trying to help if this happened! So sad! Love it
Oriondruid chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
This is a little OOC, sure, but it is to be expected after the shock he's hd that Cato would be changed by the experience. It is sad and well plotted, but the writing is technically dodgy, with several typos. Also the name of Enobaria's ex Arena partner/boyfriend is a bit odd sounding to UK ears like mine. In this country certainly Mavis is strictly an old fashioned female name, reminiscent of someone in late middle age who walks around wearing a hairnet. :o)
However, the story certaily succeeds in showing the terrible loss of Clove from Cato's point of view, the true nature of what being a 'Victor' means and the waste of young lives in the Games. Generally very good, apart from the several typos and name issue.
Many Blessings.
Oriondruid, (John).