|Reviews for Years without you|
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 1 . 1/15
This is ridiculously disjointed and difficult to read, although the general idea is good. You just need to reorganize it and make the passage of time more distinguishable.
| J'aime ma vie chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
Cute story... but you really need to work on your formatting, grammar, and punctuation.
| janet1982 chapter 1 . 7/29/2014
cute and sweet )
| Kilataia chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
Bittersweet, but i'm happy they are together now :). Good story, you could work some on your grammar though. Please update!
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
I like it! **
| Fan de Basil de Baker Street chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Cute! I found that shame you don't explain the birth but it's cute!
| IggyInin20218 chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
This was good despite all the spelling mistakes and the errors. However I am not going to judge you because make as many mistakes as you do or more (more actually)! I really like your story and the name you gave for Thorin and Bilbo's son! Erline is really neat because it reminds me ,for some reason, of Erebor. :D Great story and I like to read some of your other fanfictions as well too! So beware some reviews that have my penname for your fanfictions! :)
| vampygurl402 chapter 1 . 2/19/2013