Reviews for Years without you
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 1 . 1/15/2015
This is ridiculously disjointed and difficult to read, although the general idea is good. You just need to reorganize it and make the passage of time more distinguishable.
J'aime ma vie chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
Cute story... but you really need to work on your formatting, grammar, and punctuation.
janet1982 chapter 1 . 7/29/2014
cute and sweet )
Kilataia chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
Bittersweet, but i'm happy they are together now :). Good story, you could work some on your grammar though. Please update!
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
I like it! **
Fan de Basil de Baker Street chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Cute! I found that shame you don't explain the birth but it's cute!
IggyInin20218 chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
This was good despite all the spelling mistakes and the errors. However I am not going to judge you because make as many mistakes as you do or more (more actually)! I really like your story and the name you gave for Thorin and Bilbo's son! Erline is really neat because it reminds me ,for some reason, of Erebor. :D Great story and I like to read some of your other fanfictions as well too! So beware some reviews that have my penname for your fanfictions! :)
vampygurl402 chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Good fic!