Reviews for The Fool and The King
Ino Death chapter 2 . 12/12/2016
I enjoyed it. The foreplay was actually much longer than the sex which surprised me. I enjoyed it a lot though. I kind of wish there was more to it.
DemonEmpress33 chapter 2 . 12/6/2016
love it
drmona lord chapter 2 . 10/26/2016
I would love to see where this ends up
Ino Death chapter 2 . 8/24/2016
Why is there not more to this? This is really good. Very few spelling errors in all and I really am enjoying it. Though Ichi has orange hair, not red.
Deathstarling556 chapter 2 . 10/25/2014
More more more more! I want to know if shiro was right or if ichigo will continue and accept him! Will his powers change? Will the others find out? This one wishes to know!
Windying chapter 2 . 10/16/2014
Please continue this story. I would love to read.
Great chapter 2 . 3/20/2014
Wow, its cute although it could be a bit more lemony. Looking forward to more!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/11/2013
Oohyes, I definitely want another chappy *-* I love your story 3 but what I think is a little bit disturbing is that Shiro doesn't have a name... I think it'd sound better than Ichi always calling him hollow xD
Still love your story
With love, Blackberry Shinigami (whos just too lazy to log in right now...)
ElectraX12 chapter 2 . 6/10/2013
pleease write more chapters!
RoxanneTheGreat chapter 2 . 6/5/2013
*nods*
Another chapter sounds nice...
pbs chapter 2 . 5/25/2013
MORE CHAPTER!
CRL chapter 2 . 5/23/2013
i want another chapter...so bad
Guest chapter 2 . 5/19/2013
Please add a new chapter
Davey Strudel chapter 2 . 5/10/2013
CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE...Please?
Siriusly Ironic chapter 2 . 5/6/2013
I really liked it a lot and it would be so awesome to read another chapter. You should continue with it, I can't wait to read more _
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