|Reviews for Dirty Little Witch|
| Claudius Clavicle chapter 8 . 6/28
Perfect grammar, fetching plot and excellent style. I'm mighty impressed. Definitelly gonna check your profile for more.
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/28
wow i was just playing injustice and this fic reminds me what would have happened if superman had won
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/27/2014
I don't know about 100, but what about 150? I enjoyed this story, great word flow.
| NorahMars chapter 7 . 7/20/2014
Interesting ideas, always loved a nice dark! Powerful!harry/hermione but Ginny pisses me off. Attitude is way too snippy. Loving all the other things tho.
| erbkaiser chapter 8 . 7/2/2014
I enjoyed the first five chapters of this fic a lot. After that it took a plunge into the dark which I didn't much care for.
Still, thanks for 5 enjoyable chapters.
| EndlessChains chapter 8 . 5/22/2014
A interesting story. The soul piece in Harry made a lot of sense in the actions of others. At least Harry now is pretty powerful with the merging of the Horcrux. Did not think that it would affect Hermione though. I guess that just means they were more soul bound then they think. It was a vey interesting take on their relationship and they did a lot of things as well. I have to admit that they work pretty fast as they took out he Horcrux then Dumbledore and finally Voldemort.
To think the debt for Ginny would be used for that. Well at least she and Malfoy are happy I think. They have a kid and all so maybe. The sealing of Dumbledore's magic is what he deserves for all the manipulations made and the Dursleys into gerbils was jus nicely done. The end of Ron might have been expected as he was a firm believer against the dark. I sort of feel bad for him but it did not last very long. The epilogue was nice and helped understand what happens in the future. At least they got a well deserved happy ending. Thank you. Keep up the good work.
| twistyguru chapter 6 . 5/7/2014
lol I can only hope that Ginny was using a fertility potion, so she's now carrying the next Malfoy heir! Once the baby's born and paternity confirmed, then tragic accidents for Lucy, Narcissa and Draco would leave Ginny the Regent for the Heir Malfoy. :)
| twistyguru chapter 3 . 5/7/2014
Very well done! Albus is typically himself, and having his magic bound is a fit punishment for his manipulations. Kudos on a great story!
| twistyguru chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
Wow! Interesting premise, can't wait to see how you play it out. :)
| james.consolidated chapter 8 . 4/26/2014
Absolutely great story! Very unique idea of having the horcrux speak and corrupt Harry. I was smiling the whole last chapter with that bit of twist. Very well done.
| H Harmon chapter 8 . 2/10/2014
I enjoyed this fic immensely. I do, however, disagree with the extent of their change. If you look at what Harry, or both of them for that matter, were made of, I believe they would have been more self-assured, but they wouldn’t have changed enough to kill unprovoked. I also believe that Harry would have shied away from the limelight, and Harry’s convictions along with his sense of right and wrong were too great to give into the shard to that extent. In any regards, good fic and I thank you.
| Starfox5 chapter 8 . 1/22/2014
Very nice take on "Harry absorbs the Soul Fragment". A nice epilogue too, with far more hints of the state of their lives than the canon epilogue - well done.
| Mr Norrell chapter 2 . 12/26/2013
Well, that escalated quickly.
| Mr Norrell chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
An interesting idea, if a bit rushed.
| KenjiMania chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
What the hell is this crap?! None of it makes sense. Then again, I never understood the appeal of Harry Potter anyway. Horrible first chapter. I felt like I lost a few brain cells after reading this. Hope everyone skips this and doesn't crawl into a corner and suck their thumbs waiting for someone to save them after reading this garbage.
How's that for a review?