Nice chapter, plz update soon.

Great chapter haven't heard from you in a while I was starting to fear that you up and left us, anyways I'm just happy for the update good job and thanks:)

This was quite interesting.

srry i havent read this in a long time and im re reading the series. i remember having fond memories of this fanfic, this was one of the first ones i read, and is still in my mind the best i have ever read, so... yea there's that.

Hey, fantasy! Just wondering if you're going to continue the series, since I'm practically dying to read the next chapter already! It's been so long, though, that I'm starting to wonder if you're still writing this story! If not, that's okay, but I just want to know! I hope you still are, though, cuz this story rocks!

Dude this the most bad ass bioshock fanfic I've read keep It up

Better and better with every chapter

Ooooh. Cliff hanger. This is such an amazing story

Good chapter, and WoW.

Hmmmmmmm...interesting...XD

I kinda like the evil possessive big sister thing like how the big sister owns the big brother it's unexplored and new

I'm a huge fan of the Bioshock series so this is a very appealing topic to me.
I've just read the first chapter and well... I think I know what I'm doing the next hours :D
Such a great story, great writing style and great idea!
I really will enjoy reading it!

Great chapter and emotions are on a rise. Good job

That was a really nice chapter... I am very curious to see what happens next...XD

Great chapter. I have a feeling that this is going to be something like the perfect rapture family with the Big Brothers as the fathers and the Big Sisters as the mothers. Then they could be guardians to the Little Sisters - nothing would ever try and harm the Little Sisters lol. It would be interesting to see the child of a Big Brother and Sister (what would they inherit from the two?)