Reviews for Narrowly Avoiding Execution
Denzel Skyeguard chapter 9 . 5/2/2014
WHAT. WHAT THE HECK. HAHA. I FEEL SO SORRY. *ahem* I feel so sorry for them, Junpei too. This is just so yes. I can't believe Junpei, and will probably not be able to handle the rest of their reactions to the news. Great, Junpei. *claps*
Denzel Skyeguard chapter 8 . 5/2/2014
Yes. Junpei, you finally caught on. Finally. He needs to work on his detective skills! This chapter was definitely sweet and humorous at the same time. Liked it so much. Next chapter's the last chapter, huh? :( Sigh. Well here goes. Thanks for making this story! I appreciate the hardwork you put for everyone to read.
Denzel Skyeguard chapter 3 . 5/2/2014
Yes. This story is yes. I love it so far. But looking at the date of this thing, I can't help but feel saddened. Will I stumble upon an ending or a large cliffhanger? Anyway, this is very much nice.
grandshadowseal chapter 9 . 9/14/2013
it's sad i hope Chidori can be saved and but i'm also a bit angry with Akihiko as he should be more careful with what he says as he knows how hard it is to lose a loved one so i'm upset with him! but can't wait for the next chapter! XD
TEAM SasuNaruHina chapter 9 . 7/27/2013
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sword slasher chapter 9 . 7/25/2013
I just finished this story and please tell me in a pm or something you haven't discontinued PLEASE I am loving this story (though I think theres one too many sex scenes but I should make a note for when I do sex scenes) pleaseeeeeeee. Especially now that I regained persona 3 to where I left off(stupid psp disc reader died had to save up to buy it on psn after recently buying it on disc). PLEASE not many akihiko minato fics and by far yours the best I adore you for making this. PLEASE CONTINUE. Also this story is amazing 4 stars.
sword slasher chapter 3 . 7/24/2013
The story is sooo te can't wait to continue reading it
Kova chapter 9 . 7/3/2013
I hope you make another chapter i was so focus on the story i was sad that you ending here when chidori gave her life to junpei. i was hoping to see what would happen next. Please write more chapters, please please pretty please.
Dr. Bateman chapter 9 . 6/20/2013
Amazing additions to the series. I love that it kept accurate to the story.
GrimmIchiUlqui21 chapter 9 . 5/14/2013
Holy Shit...I did not expect that type of outburst from him. What an ass! That was not the way their relationship should have been revealed. I don't care how badly he was hurting inside. Yes, seeing someone you care about die right in front of you can be really depressing but that was absolutely wrong. I hope he apologizes for that horrid outburst. Good chapter by the way. Can't wait for the next one! Keep up the great work! :-D
GrimmIchiUlqui21 chapter 8 . 5/2/2013
Oh My Gosh, yays! I was waiting for this chapter! I'm sorry that school is hard for you right now, I hope it gets better. I really like how this chapter was, and I laughed so hard at Junpei's reaction to catching Minato and Akihiko in bed. I'm glad that they already have that strong type of bond where they want to stay together no matter what people think (though I think they would feel better if their relationship was excepted by all of their friends). What part are you at in the game? Can't wait for your next chapter! Keep up the great work! :-D
Cielo chapter 7 . 4/29/2013
Awww... That's so cute! I love the way you describe how passionate they are about one another and junpei being a little freaked out yet still wants to accept it. This story is more than awesome and I hope you can update soon!

-Cielo
GrimmIchiUlqui21 chapter 7 . 4/9/2013
Oh My Gosh, I never get tired of reading the chapters of this story. I love that they have made things official but are still taking the whole emotional part slow. Junpei is SO slow, lol. I thought that the declaration from him was a little unsettling until Ryoji said that he wouldn't treat them any differently, and that made me happy. I was wondering when the women are going to start catching on? I always find myself on the edge of my seat when I read this story and that what makes a story a good one! Keep up the great work! Can't wait for your next chapter! :-D

P.S. I hope you feel better soon, get some rest and drink plenty of fluids! And don't worry I will always wait for your updates! *Gives glass of water and some medicine, waiving a little flag that say "Fight"* :-D
Windshield chapter 7 . 4/8/2013
Ahhhh I really like this story
you're doing a great job
hope you feel better!
GrimmIchiUlqui21 chapter 6 . 4/1/2013
Oh my gosh, I had been waiting for this chapter! Yay! Hope that you are better now as well. By the way it was so worth the wait so don't worry. I absolutely loved this chapter! I really like how their emotions are starting to surface more and more. You have made them quite clueless to what the emotions are and what they mean and that quite enjoyable to read. It makes it so you want to read every chapter that is posted until the end of the story to see when they realize it themselves and when others realize it. I also had a question concerning the story but I think I'll wait for a PM and ask you then. I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the amazing work! :-D
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