Reviews for I Challenge My Fate
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
I think I would have liked it better if the avatars name was robin otherwise it just feels out of character
Zallow chapter 1 . 2/10/2015
Hey it was quiet good ! :D
Dengar999 chapter 1 . 1/4/2015
Shouldn't this story be rated T for Teen since the blood is being spread down on Avatar/Chris's cloak and Lucina is already covered in blood?

Woooohhh I didn't expect this to happen. Mistakes were made... Why Lucina...? Revenge does not solve anything, but you made a big mistake to Robin. This reminds me of Ratonhnhaké ton and Kanentó kon fighting against each other at Assassin's Creed III or Ratonhnhaké ton versus Haytham Kenway the ending part of the fight.

7.5/10 Short story, but emotional sad and sorrow. Poor Avatar/Chris... A heart broken FanFiction story I read. Especially that I feel bad for Lucina... She's going to take a lot of lost in the end.
(Plays: My Curse by Killswitch Engage and then The Arms of Sorrow.)

Yeah sure I think you should make some more of this and turn it to a series with chapters on it.
AccountKiller404 chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
Why do I even... I've been looking EVERYWHERE for a fanfic like this, and I don't even know why... Good job, I love reading fics about character deaths,(oddly) but I don't have the guts to write one...
Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
Well, that was pretty sad. I wish to see more of that.
Iryerris chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Please continue this. I want to see the aftermath.
Mark-KrisRobin chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
... Why do the words "kill" and "Chrom" match so perfectly...?
Fireminer chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
Classic! Hope you continue this!
Deader than the Doornail chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
That last sentence is so sad... very nice job.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
Chris, a name that I couldn't take seriously in my game so I deleted the file. Anyways, Lucina actually did it! Wow. That was different.
Xanedis chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
I really liked this story, especially the ending. It was nice to see that somebody experimented around it a bit, and I appreciate the emotional weight that this story delivers. Nice job :P
Lucarai chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
More Lucinaxavatar, I like how you went the other way with this story, so ill fav ya
Galaga chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
I lurbs it! Continue!
Angel Of Darkness And Light chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
That was...

... unexpected. Holy crap. I feel like crying.

Good job. :)
Gerti chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Oh my god you little shit.
I thought that was just going to be a retelling of what happened in the game!
Not this wonderfully terrible punch in the heart!
I did not need feelings this severe, this early in the day!
Anyway, great story, did not see the twist coming, there are tears in my eyes.

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