Reviews for The Second-to-Last Leap
Aileil chapter 1 . 5/20/2015
Thank you so much for bringing him home! Your whole story is heart-wrenching, seeing how draining it is on Al and, even if Sam cannot recognize it, on him as well. Yet it is beautifully resolved and we know they finally have peace. I especially liked the line "We reached that unreachable star Sam, but you tripped over it and fell and now I'm left picking up the pieces." It was beautiful and poetic in its tragedy. Thank you so much.
red2013 chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
i feel sorry for al going to heaven and leaving sam behind in the past where he is in the jungle.

James Birdsong chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
mgowriter chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Thank you for sharing this. I never thought about what the leap before the last would be like, and really enjoyed reading it.