Reviews for Heartbeat
prolixius5 chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
Wow, how you brilliantly convey the emotions through just a few words, carefully chosen! I love the ambiance you set for the reader... and Jane.
Helen chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
Awesome! That is exactly what should be uploaded on fanfictions: Stories (or one-shots) with atmosphere and emotion. My heart beats for this one-shot ;-)
Mossi.b chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
This is VERY powerful...you have described the sense of shock and disbelief perfectly...he is almost outside himself looking on and unable to direct his actions.
It is clever to describe the smell, we forget about the smell of blood at the scenes, and Jane is a man who notices odours...he must always associated that smell with his family.

A really good and powerful piece that really packs a punch.