|Reviews for Clint Barton is a Damn Lucky Man|
| featheredschist chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
I loved both! Very sweet story here, and the other just grabs and holds you tight (and not in the nice way either).
Two corrections, if I may be bold: both Natasha's lines - "Take this. You probably don't want anyone to listening in." either drop 'to' or add 'be'; and "Do screw this up," she warned, "lock the door behind me." change 'do' to 'don't', cuz we don't want him to screw it up! These are the glaring ones, because they have different meanings than we're going for!
Always excellent to get notices from you!
| MorWolfMor chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
Absolutely loved this ending one shot to the first, it was a wonderful read. You do quite well with expressing emotions, feelings, the subtleties that make it that much more real. Great job, love.