It wasn’t crappy! I loved it

I'd say not bad for a first fic. It can only get better from here. You have a gift for the written word. Hone it. Use it. Most important of all: Don't give up on it. Hope to see more from you.

LOL
soooooooo cute
not bad for your first, actually i think it is great!
YAY YOU!

That was awesome.

Great start. Would like to see you continue it!

That wasn't crappy. It was hilarious. In my opinion, if a fic is pretty well written in terms of spelling, grammar, and punctuation, that makes up for an odd storyline. Definitely OOC, but you made that clear and it wasn't so OOC that it was unbelievable. Good job. I'd love to read more like this.

It's not crappy at all. It's very funny.

Oh but it wasn't crappy at all! It was really good! I thought it was hilarious actually. Poor Booth. I knew that's what he was going to tell her. Anyway this was really good. Hope you write more. :)

Not crappy at all! I really enjoyed this :)

I liked your story hope you continue

Its not crappy. It's OOC but it's your story and you warned that it would be OOC. I think it's fine and the ending with Booth and Hodgins is cute.

I really liked it. I like anything that fills the gap between season six and seven. You should go on with it.