Reviews for Pokemon: Path of Light
Will The Charizard chapter 2 . 4/3/2013
I like it! The fight between blackout and ryan was entertaining, and it felt like you set it up well. Only criticism is that the chapters are a little short. Great story anyway!
tinyRyan117 chapter 2 . 3/5/2013
good good I like it keep it up you two
RockytheTyranitar chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
I decided to check if you had posted yet, and I came across this. Me Gusta. How did you get all those pokemon in one picture? Anyways you need a beta, and as it is also partially mine I would happily help.
tinyRyan117 chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
Good chapter my advice would be show a description in the setting and it will be better other than that it's still good
MisterBland1 chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
The idea of having a cast of pokemon be the main characters is very interesting. My only advice would be to avoid telling the reader what PoV the story is being told in. Connecting the events through a single PoV will be a rewarding challenge.