|Reviews for Breaking the Dam|
| ShiftWithTheWind chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
Wow, this is amazing. This is some of the most engaging writing I've read from you on here, it's definitely better than your earlier stuff. Everything flows much better, adds, builds, and the language is used really well, the imagery of mental fire blending with physical water is REALLY powerful.
And the story does what it should, it IMPROVES on the original material. I'm much more emotionally connected to this sequence than I could ever be when watching it.
Eight down. Now on to your big stuff.
| Burning Fires chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
Why has no one reviewed this? I'm a big fan of Jean and the Phoenix both and I also like Prof. X too. I supposed he didn't get out and do as much as the rest of the team. I never really noticed it, though. He was stuckin a wheelchair, but I felt he always did what he could. I am so so glad you're making more interactions between Prof X and Phoenix. Can't wait to read more of your undoubtably awesome work.