Reviews for Birthday Gift
Suzululu4moe chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
nice story. love cloud's personality in this one. haha Gen lending the puppy porn XD Genesis to the rescue. playful puppy and the cute maid boy.
xseetarliax chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
I'm going round and reviewing all the stories I liked because only until recently I actually decide to make an account so anyway thanks for giving me some Zack and Cloud fan fiction to read because they are my favorite pairing! :D
xion chapter 1 . 3/20/2013 really liked this.
Xiaa chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
Eee I still love this fic so much! It was so much to collab with you and I wish I could go back and redraw the scenes . but still thank you so much for writing this, I remember you struggling a ton with it;;; but you came through in the end! And I'm so proud of you 3
StuffedToyCuddler chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Soooooooooo haaaaawtt! XD *dies*
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
makes you wonder what the hell goes on in peoples minds these days...Cloud in a dress is not sexy. Made me laugh though.
ok as for a review outside of opinion, Cloud was rather ooc here and the scenarios just felt like an 80s porno. that said the writting style was very very good.
The only worry i have with stories like this is; İt seems only a margin away from the infamous 'Cloud mows the lawn'
JollyBigSis chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
I totally LOVE this. . .and xiaa's comic too! Both pieces are an immense pleasure to read. Thank you so much for sharing.